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~ A Story of Love's Power ~
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~ A Story of Love's Power ~ |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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 Searching through the many books lined up there in a row - Old fairy-tales beneath the dust some read, but long ago... I briefly skimmed through many there alas, I put them down - Still searching for that special book I continued with a frown... 'Twas then a book fell to the floor there at my very feet - I picked it up,"How odd", I thought and took it to my seat... It's cover, oh so handsome - brownish leather, threads of green... An intricate design thereon no finer, had I seen... I sat back in my chair and slowly sipped my cup of tea - This gorgeous book there in my lap beckoning to me... It seemed to whisper to my hands "Open me, my love..." So I turned the page & slowly read no clue, the contents of... 'Twas as if I'd stepped into a land of mysterious allure - What pulled me in & held me there, I really wasn't sure... A voice within the pages sweetly beckoned me along - To explore the depths & realms therein, didn't matter right or wrong... The story led me through a maze a labyrinth of soul - The pages were his heart, and as I read it made him whole... To look thereon the pictures, was to see deep in his eyes - As my hands caressed the pages turning - I could hear his sighs... I wandered through, quite overwhelmed this land of wondrous power - Breathlessly in ecstasy I lost track of the hour... His voice my guide, his touch my map I delved into him deep - This storybook of sweet allure my reading, made him weep... I found my way into his soul 'twas then he handed me - A fragile token of his love to hold eternally... I fell asleep there in his arms our journey just begun - He kissed my lips & promised me he'd wake me with the sun. * * * * * * * * * * * * I felt the warmth against my face too soon, the morning came - I'd slept all night there in that chair calling out his name... The book lay open in my lap the pages were all blank - Realizing now, 'twas just a dream my heart & hope, both sank. But then I noticed in my hand I held a fragile flower - The token he had given me to remind me of love's power... - I had forgotten. * * * * * * * * * * * * * by poetFemmeFatale May 3, 2000 [This message has been edited by poetFemmeFatale (edited 05-04-2000).] |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
FemmeFatal this was loving and warm and read so well ----) Ah the empty pages that we fill with our memories -- are incredible, aren't they. Thanks so much for sharing. netswan |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Gen, oh, Gen, This is now my favorite of yours. You are a master at these story poems. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Netswan - - You picked up exactly on why those pages were blank...very good dear! That was a little twist I threw in without really even knowing it. LOL Jeffrey - - I curtsie to you...  Thank you much! This "story poetry" is all new to me. It's a style I've just very recently picked up. My poetry seems to be far better now - although unfortunately, much lengthier!  I was telling my muse earlier tonight, that when I begin these stories, I only have one thought or idea. I never know where it's gonna take me, or how it's gonna end. It's funny, and kind of spooky.....(nervous laugh) As I begin writing, the story just "happens", and before I know it, I've got another darn LONG story poem! ROFL Anyways...I'll hush now. Thank you kindly for enjoying my tales! *curtsies* |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
poetFemmeFatale, this story was wonderful, you write the best blank page verse of anybody...... your a big dreamer like I. The lake calls tonight, I've got my own dream so see ya. ..... I keep forgetting to sign my brother off when he uses this website to post his stuff.... and no again I am not an insect. this is not my alais..........  [This message has been edited by insect (edited 05-04-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Yes, you are getting better (is that possible?). I enjoyed this poem - the story and the heart behind it. Hang onto your muse if this is the result of having it around!  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
girl...this is excellent...makes me think I need to renew me library card as well love the imagery in this... and as always...your sincere and so well expressed emotions... I feel em every time... your just so darn good at this *smile* these story poem of yours need to be wrote out in mini book form and illustrated... *just a thought* later gen-gator jm |
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msstt Junior Member
since 2000-05-03
Posts 23Huntington,Ind |
This was lovely.Tricia |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well now, I don't know if I should be replying to this one or not... Kinda touchy when it comes to giving flowers you know? You poetry continues to grow Gen, and you story weaving is magnificent, though. Even for someone who doesn't pay attention to flowers... Michael |
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*~Juliet~* Junior Member
since 2000-05-02
Posts 19Key West |
Very nice poem...I really enjoyed reading it!! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Gee, would you consider lending the book out to a few of your "passionate" friends? Lovely tale you've woven for us, just the kind of dreams I like. Corinne |
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A.C.Turner Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 83Reading, Pa.Home of Bardfest |
Simply captivating! ACT. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Loved it, was very easy for the eyes. Each line had you wondering what would come next. Loved the similie of the book becoming reality. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Okay Gen. . . I'm still having a little bit of trouble with you and this whole romantic thing. . . but I'll have less trouble if it keeps being this good!!! Excellent. . . hold on to that muse!! ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
PFF, You can't get much better then this. Excellent writing. *L* |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
[sigh] You are God sent I swear! I really like this new style of poetry you've developed for yourself lately. Mixing in a fantasy/story with the poem... makes for a VERY captivating read... They're longer, but they're sooooo good it leaves me wanting more! =)< !signature--> "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment. Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott [This message has been edited by WhiteNite (edited 05-05-2000).] |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
I love the way this poem is written. Great story. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
sigh ... This is an absolute jewel of poetry. CocoBaci |
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Tuck Junior Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 27 |
not only does love travel the miles, but often love travels through time and dimensions as well.....love works wonders, doesn't it? wonderful work! |
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