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ashen
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0 posted 05-03-2000 11:41 PM       View Profile for ashen   Email ashen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ashen


Life

Interest evolves from what you see
Freedom involves everything
Resolution is an ideal
Because even the greatest minds learnt to feel.

A learning curb is what life is
Scenery trips are life’s bliss
Open mentions from the heart
Why do we always start.

When man landed on the moon
Belief in space was reassumed
An imprint on what I can be
The reality of what is me.

Constant bickering and more lies
Children learning how to cry
From our fears we run away
And to the light we face again.
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netswan
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1 posted 05-04-2000 01:48 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Lovely Poem Ashen -------thanks for
sharing this ---

netswan
ESP
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since 01-25-2000
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Floating gently on a cloud....


2 posted 05-04-2000 06:23 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Ashen, this is lovely! You take a unique look at life and express it beautifully.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


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Cerenity
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3 posted 05-05-2000 08:43 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi ashen,

This is wonderful, reality can be an eye opener for sure, enjoyed alot and welcome to passions.

Cerenity
 
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