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ashen
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since 2000-04-25
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0 posted 2000-05-03 11:41 PM



Life

Interest evolves from what you see
Freedom involves everything
Resolution is an ideal
Because even the greatest minds learnt to feel.

A learning curb is what life is
Scenery trips are life’s bliss
Open mentions from the heart
Why do we always start.

When man landed on the moon
Belief in space was reassumed
An imprint on what I can be
The reality of what is me.

Constant bickering and more lies
Children learning how to cry
From our fears we run away
And to the light we face again.

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netswan
Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
1 posted 2000-05-04 01:48 AM


Lovely Poem Ashen -------thanks for
sharing this ---

netswan

ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-05-04 06:23 AM


Ashen, this is lovely! You take a unique look at life and express it beautifully.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Cerenity
Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
3 posted 2000-05-05 08:43 AM


Hi ashen,

This is wonderful, reality can be an eye opener for sure, enjoyed alot and welcome to passions.

Cerenity

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