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Open Poetry #7

The Clouds of Life

Wet
Member

since 1999-07-25

Posts 60
Brentwood, Tn

0 posted 2000-05-03 11:05 PM

The Clouds of Life

The Clouds of Life
White angels in the sky
Renewing your soul
When they cry
Refreshing the earth
With its tears
The people rejoyce
As it washes away their fears
But when blood is shed
The storms erupt
And the Black Thunder above
Shakes the dry bloody ground below
And as the shameful earth begs for mercy
The Night falls
And the star filled sky
Watches over the ocean below
And while the people dream
The gods rest
In the silver shades
Of their own heaven.

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

1 posted 2000-05-03 11:28 PM

I enjoyed this. You left vivd images with your words in my mind.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-05-04 06:06 AM

Wet~
Quite the vivid picture you painted with
your expressions.
Enjoyed very much.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

3 posted 2000-05-05 08:33 AM

Hi Wet,

This is lovely and vived, enjoyed it muches.

Cerenity

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