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The Clouds of Life

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Wet
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The Clouds of Life

The Clouds of Life
White angels in the sky
Renewing your soul
When they cry
Refreshing the earth
With its tears
The people rejoyce
As it washes away their fears
But when blood is shed
The storms erupt
And the Black Thunder above
Shakes the dry bloody ground below
And as the shameful earth begs for mercy
The Night falls
And the star filled sky
Watches over the ocean below
And while the people dream
The gods rest
In the silver shades
Of their own heaven.
© Copyright 2000 David Danielson - All Rights Reserved
kitkat
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I enjoyed this. You left vivd images with your words in my mind.
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Wet~
Quite the vivid picture you painted with
your expressions.
Enjoyed very much.
~*Marge*~


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Cerenity
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Hi Wet,

This is lovely and vived, enjoyed it muches.

Cerenity
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