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~What I Need~

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Alwye
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In the space between moments


0 posted 05-03-2000 11:05 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alwye

A friend and I were discussing what we look for in love or in a partner in life and that is what inspired this.  This is some of what I look for.  

I need to be touched with feathery grace
And held with feverish intensity
I want to see your tender eyes entranced
When you secretly glance at me.

I wish for our dreams to softly entwine
Among the tangles of everyday life
And I yearn for honey sweet whispers
To melt away each other's strife.

I hope for a smile upon your lips
Whenever the wind carries my name
And I believe that our hearts are combined
For our souls seem one and the same.

What I need is a love meant forever
That flowers upon the angels' skies
And I truly know I have such a gift
When I become lost in your eyes.





 *Krista Knutson*

"Lonliness is the human condition."
*Mark Twain, in the book "The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn"*
© Copyright 2000 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-03-2000 11:08 PM       View Profile for Wet   Email Wet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Wet's Home Page   View IP for Wet

I feel the same feelings here. I love it!!
Dusk Treader
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2 posted 05-03-2000 11:44 PM       View Profile for Dusk Treader   Email Dusk Treader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dusk Treader

Great poem Krista! I agree with many of the things you said.  Beautiful, I hope we all have love of that caliber in our futures.

 Abrahm Simons

"...Watching fate as it flows down the path we have chose" - Trent Reznor, "We're in this Together"

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3 posted 05-04-2000 06:28 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Krista~
Conversations with friends can create
the neatest images ...  yours are just that.
Sweet thoughts.
~*Marge*~


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ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


4 posted 05-04-2000 09:43 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Lovely, Krista!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
Janet Marie
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5 posted 05-04-2000 10:11 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

BEAUTIFUL thoughts and hopes written out with your usual grace...
very lovely sentiments...
and when ya find him...see if he has a brother
(better yet...clone em) *smile*


 ~as always, Take Care,JM~
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I know it's been a long road
To get these towns behind me and I
Will gladly reap what we may sow--
I am there for you ...
and you're there for me ...
Are you waiting for
Heart in hand
Woman and man
See me where I stand I am
Heart
Heart in hand
~vertical horizon~

poetFemmeFatale
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6 posted 05-04-2000 10:29 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Oooohhh....the last stanza is definately my fav!  Very beautiful needs you have dear!  LOL  Thank you for sharing your list in such a wonderful way!  
Denise
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7 posted 05-04-2000 10:54 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Just absolutely beautiful, Krista! Flawless, as always!

Denise
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Wet- I'm glad you have the same feelings.  Thanks.  

Dusk- I too believe we have such loves in our futures.  Thank you for your kindness.

Marge- Thank you so much.    

Esp- Thank you also!

Janet- I do believe I have found him, although I think he tends to forget some of this stuff sometimes.  (but hey, we're all human, aren't we?)And nope, sorry, he's an only child.   But I think he's worth cloning...    Thanks for your beautiful reply.

Femme- And thank you also!  To have you reply to my poetry is an honor, as always.  

denise- Thank you very much!  


 *Krista Knutson*

"Lonliness is the human condition."
*Mark Twain, in the book "The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn"*


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9 posted 05-04-2000 10:23 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

Krista, that was another beautiful poem.   A person can hope for that kind of love, and if they belive strong enough about it, they can get it.  

Lovely poem.  


 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*
 
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