If this guy did not know, he better well know now. This was fantastic Janet. You poured your heart out on the line(as to say). If this poem doesn"t get his attention I just do not know what will. Good Luck Kathy
Could someone please open a window??? LOL. In all seriousness...this was hot, sizzling, BEAUTIFUL, full of love, longing, depth, intensity. I truly enjoyed reading it. What a pretty view into your heart you have given us!
Love ya, Amy
~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
J.M.* This is one of my favorites I must say....first I thought this was about a love lost then it went to a love not yet acquired....the want for them is about the same...giving it all up for just one sweet moment...to make it all worth it. Written with the style that you have perfected!! Thank you for sharing this **AW hugs** S.S.
Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today.
thank you guys...for these GLOWING replies... I am smiling from heart to soul by them. This poem was a special one for me...I fussed over it more than any others.It was important for me to get it right. Im so pleased it touched you, in what ever way that was... *smile*
love ya all, jm
Texas . . .
Wow...I was gonna pick out my favorite stanzas, but they were ALL good, and just kept getting better toward the end! I really liked your list of all the things you wanted from "him"....very sensual list indeed...This really hits home with me right now - that longing you have, the desires you feel - yep....I've been tied up in those now for awhile... Unfortunately, I've been fighting 'em off, and trying to convince myself I'm winning! ROFL If you've got your eye on somebody, I pray he knows he's being watched! LOL You go get him girl! I'm right on your flank, in case he tries to duck right! hehe
Of all the people i have never met all the things i have never done, all places i have never been all prizes i have never won
Of all the joy there is to share all the dreams that can come true there's only one I hold so dear it's to be a special friend to you ~~~~~~~ Enjoyed your poem JM, your writing is superb as always~~ BEH
A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.
Lansing, MI USA