you write my heart with this one Jeff, now its my turn to ask if you've been peeking
this is sensual and passion filled..VERY NICE..and I think its definatly one of your best... I like seeing this side of you..and you took your writing to a higher level with this as well. very well written and expressed you should keep exploring this side of your poetry. take care, jm
Jeffrey, this is good. When I grew up I was told never to use the word "I" in a poem ----- so though I write them with the word 'I' many times -- I do enjoy reading one so much without it being so personal.
OH my passion is flying ----have always wondered what a one night stand would be like - how one would feel in the morning
This is good and very well written.
Floating gently on a cloud....