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Passion's Flames
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Passion's Flames |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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 Release From Passion's Flames A touch...soft and tender A whisper...full of desire A gasp...of sweet surrender As passion fuels the fire No words...spoken between them No promises...to be kept No lies...being told tonight No looking back...no regrets Longing to hold each other Such precious little time Both vowed to another Being lonely their only crime Tomorrow bringing sorrow A brief moment of shame With the memory of this one night A release from passion's flames I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you write my heart with this one Jeff, now its my turn to ask if you've been peeking  this is sensual and passion filled..VERY NICE..and I think its definatly one of your best... I like seeing this side of you..and you took your writing to a higher level with this as well. very well written and expressed you should keep exploring this side of your poetry. take care, jm |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh JC---perfectly enchanting---and how we all relate...well done, luvie---thanks for sharing. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Very well done, Jeffrey...and full of honest emotion. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Well sir, of course my first impression was of a NC. country honky tonk. Then upon my reread I realized it was just my fantasy! Well no matter, It was a very good decription of a one night stand. marina |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very beautifully expressed I like it when a man expresses passion in his poetry, especially when it's well done Liz |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Jan, No not peeking...hehe...I'm psychic...lol seriously Jan, you have truly brightened my day with such a sweet reply. I think it's one of my best as well. Thank you.(((HUG))) serenity, Thanks for the "enchanting" Thank you Martie,  And Marina, ROFL....you are twisted m'lady, but I still love ya. Glad you all enjoyed. Makes my heart smile. Thank you. I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
LIZ, you snuck in there on me. Thank you for the warm reply. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I can't say that passion without commitment appeals to me. I guess I'm old fashoned... but I still enjoyed the poem. Good job. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent writing, Jeffrey. This is another side of you.....and a good one, at that! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This is beautiful, Jeffrey. Very senual and sexy. I like it!! Good work, my friend!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
ahhhhhh deep sigh..... I just blew my bangs up in the air with joy over this one!!!! Kathleen indy31_99@yahoo.com |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Jeffrey, this is good. When I grew up I was told never to use the word "I" in a poem ----- so though I write them with the word 'I' many times -- I do enjoy reading one so much without it being so personal. OH my passion is flying ----have always wondered what a one night stand would be like - how one would feel in the morning This is good and very well written. netswan |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Jeffrey!! Wow!! I really like this one, perfect descriptions therein. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Jeffrey~ A wonderful, passionate poem nicely done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Jeff, I think everyone knows the pangs of love unattainable. The sorrow that coms with trying to attain it is immense and you captured it very well. David2 |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thank you everyone. You have made me smile with your kind words. I think I like this side of me I know it certainly feels like home anyway. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Jeffrey, loved the passion , very touching , keep them coming. Us women love this stuff . hehe.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jeffrey, This one is a keeper. Very good. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeffrey~ YES ! Now who ROCKS ? You da' boss ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Tia Junior Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 41massachusetts |
that is a very deep poem and i think it was one of the best ones you've written...good job |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Jeffrey, Very,very good! I love it! Such sweetness, and full of all of passion's fire, indeed! Wonderful! Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Jeffrey - this is a great poem - I'm so pleased I clicked on the button to read it! Your writing style is beautiful - I can learn much from you my friend thank you for sharing it.Roniece |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Awwe....You guys are the best. Thank you for the warm responces. Marge, Girl you still rock! All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This apparently slipped by me a couple of times, but I finally caught it...and if this is the "other side" of you, Jeff, then it is certainly your better side... |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thank you sunshine....I think I now have writer's block....mabe I just need a nap...lol All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Sometimes loneliness is the worst crime of all, Jeffrey. Certainly the one found most unforgiving by the rest of the world. Good poem, my friend. Michael |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Very pleasing to my senses tonight. Excellent writing. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
Jeffrey, Thanks for welcoming me to Passions. My heart ached after reading this poem. I look forward to reading your others. Thanks, Lori |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Jeffrey,Jeffrey,Jeffrey What a poem, Sigh,Sigh,BIG Sigh now breath Cerenity, you speak, you rock, what ever you are this is awesome, you are flaming. Cerenity |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I adored this Jeffrey ... so much emotion and passion. I almost feel guilty myself! /Kit |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
jeff-- my sweets..how did i miss this one? lol...i must be really outta the loop as of late. i apologize. gosh this was written with such intense emotion..it left me wondering and sorta breathless. i love this side of your writing...it truly speaks to the heart. take care, amy |
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