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PericolosoAmore
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since 2000-04-14
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0 posted 2000-05-03 04:11 PM


What is love,
What ever it is,
It has taken me over,
What ever I see,
It gives me the shiver,
It reminds me of you,
Everything.
In song,
In picture,
In television,
And I see you,
Everywhere,
Everybody is you,
Every couple that I see,
Is you and me,
Together.

So now I know what love is,
It has confused me,
Time and time again,
What it is has made me think,
Now,
And then,
And all the time,
I can not feel it,
I hust know,
Thinking of you always,
I have come to the conclusion,
That I'm in love with you.

By PericolosoAmore.



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Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
1 posted 2000-05-03 04:35 PM



Welcome to Passions!  I'm not sure if I have a definition of Love either...but you have all the symptoms    Thank you for sharing this.


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.


Irie
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since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
2 posted 2000-05-03 06:54 PM


What is this thing we call love that takes over our
mind, bodies and souls?
It's a great feeling to fall in love....
Isn't it?

Welcome to Passions  

~Sheri

Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-05-03 08:37 PM


Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special welcome....I look forward to reading more of your work...  
Jeffrey Carter
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since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!
4 posted 2000-05-03 08:56 PM


Welcome to passion's. I think you will see that we are like one big family here.

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
5 posted 2000-05-03 11:07 PM


Welcome to Passions Pericoloso!

Ah, the mystery of love.  Great Poem.
Sounds like you are describing the
undescribable very well.

netswan


kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia
6 posted 2000-05-03 11:31 PM


Hi and Welecome to Passions. Isn't Love Grand

Nice read. Thanks for sharing

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
7 posted 2000-05-04 12:26 PM


Ah to love or not to love, that is the question? your deeply in love with this person, I think you should let them know!
enjoyed your poem! WELCOME!!!

Marge Tindal
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since 1999-11-06
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8 posted 2000-05-04 06:41 AM


Peri~
Welcome to Passion's.
Enjoyed the read.
Seems you've plopped yourself
down in the middle of a meadow of love.
Nice place to be.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
9 posted 2000-05-05 08:46 AM


Hi PericolosoAmore,

Well you sound deep in love thats wonderful, I wish you the best.

WELCOME TO PASSIONS,

Cerenity

mariee66
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since 2000-01-30
Posts 596
Recess, OfYourMind
10 posted 2000-05-05 04:48 PM


That's an interesting screen name...DangerousLove (translated)  
Most cool...  

Nice entrance "Dangerous One"  

angelswing
Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705
United Kingdom
11 posted 2000-05-08 07:18 AM


I have said it once, I'll say it again, I like this poem very much and you have a lot of lovin to give, so express some of it in your poetry and you can't lose . Can't wait for your next poem .
L.of.L. Tom .


 With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .

PericolosoAmore
Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 31

12 posted 2000-05-08 11:56 AM


Thanx everyone.
I feel quite good about this first poem.
I shall be putting some more on very soon.
Thanx again.
P. A.

Enola
Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 138
England
13 posted 2000-05-08 12:09 PM


What do you mean, it sucks?  It's great!  Even though I'm not in the same sitation as you, I still get what you mean & that's one of the things that makes it great.

"In song,"

In Slipknot?!?!  Tee-hee!!!
Love& Hugs
Debs.


 The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.

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