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Willyg76
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0 posted 2000-05-03 02:56 PM


Love is...
                                    2-6-00
-by Will Gibbins      


Love is not but a fleeting thought,
Love is an endless timeless story,
Different people wish love to be bought,
But it must be felt by one another.

Love is deaf,
Love is blind,
it may be sweet as candy,
sour as rind.

Love may exist between two opposite lives,
As in Romeo and Juliet,
Yet in the end, for love, each of them dies,
Love may be so powerful as to go on past life.

Lieben is to love auf deutsch,
Yet no matter where you are it is still the same,
Love may exist across a continent,
But in seperation comes the greatest pain.

Love is fragile as a vase,
Love is beautiful as a dove,
Yet it dies too easily, which is too often the case,
Love is the greatest and worst feeling known to man.

by the way, i wrote this and I am 14... yet do not look at it based on that... Look at it for what it is... poetry



 "Kuessen mich leidenschaftlich, aber lieben mich tief" -Will Gibbins

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Corazon
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1 posted 2000-05-03 03:03 PM


well, welcome, you seem to know lots about love for such a young age....lol....I am 44 and still don't understand it  
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2 posted 2000-05-03 03:17 PM


Welcome to passions!

WOW!!! This is a great look at love, and a great first post. I am looking forward to reading more of your work.

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

ESP
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3 posted 2000-05-03 04:00 PM


Wow!!! This is great! You know a heck of a lot more about love then some! Including me to be honest! Well written! Keep posting and btw, welcome to Passions!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Aimster
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4 posted 2000-05-03 04:12 PM


Welcome to Passions!   This was very good! You sure do know a lot about this subject love, i am impressed. To me, poetry has no age boundaries. It doesn't matter what your age is...if you write from the heart, then it's all poetic goodness!

take care,
Amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

Butterflies_dont_cry
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5 posted 2000-05-03 04:38 PM



Welcome to Passions! You've done a great job for your first post here and believe me....at any age love is a mystery  


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.


Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
6 posted 2000-05-03 07:53 PM


Welcome to the family! I read with my heart and not my head..my heart says this is so full of wisdom and truth! Thank you.. please check your email for a special welcome.  
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