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I might be dangerous |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209
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ok...lol...I probably wrote this as an escape mechanism from yesterday...and so with my mind not opeating on all cylinders I am not sure how it will go over .....but here goes *s* I might be dangerous the road was dark and deserted when in the rearview sirens roar lights blink and she cursed beneath her breath until she saw his face entranced was she by his all business no time for play license and registration please her eyes twinkled she grabbed her fantasy quick before he realized he was to be the costar and she asked don't I look dangerous to you? taken aback more by what her eyes were voicing than by her question his mind blanked his reply at first somehow he came up with an excuse me? but from deep inside his wanting the attentive salute interpreted the twinkle before she needed to clarify and so he looked down undaunted she asked again don't you think I look dangerous? I would search me if I were you... eyes locked in silent conversation questions and answers traveling in split second time the twinkle in her eyes and the curve of her take me to your mouth and kiss me lips spoke to him so loudly that reason could no longer be heard and he almost didn't recognize the voice that said maybe you should step out of the car miss and spread them wide she too quickly for him to change his mind obliged I might be dangerous she laughed again over her shoulder you should be thorough with your search, that is and she arched her firm body into the smoothness into the hardness of his search she turned to face her fantasy... and what he gave she took [This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 05-04-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ah...excuse me...was gonna reply to poem... but I suddenly feel the need for speed... gonna go for a drive... LOL whew...read hot like corvette Corazon... way cool poem... ahhh most excellent imagery  very creative work here. later, jm |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Man, what I wouldn't give to be a policeman...lol Whew....this was intence Hey Janet, you gonna be driving in North Carolina....huh?.....I gotta go rent a policeman's uniform...lol  All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
hey you two *g* did I put those ideas in your head? *innocent look* lol....glad you enjoyed  [This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 05-03-2000).] |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lol....not quite what I was expecting!!! I enjoyed it though! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Corazon, with your luck, you would get a defective detective!  Love the scenario! uh, I'd be glad Toe isn't around. He would be merciless with you, yanno??? |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
ESP...with your name, your reply gave me a smile....glad you liked bal....ROFG@defective detective...now doesn't that bring up an image?...and yep toe would have had fun with this one...kind of off the wall for me, but innuenduously ripe for a toerag picking |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Might be???? There's no question about it, O&O... you ARE dangerous! LOL And I sure wish Toe was around to rag you! *G* |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
What are you trying to do, your gonna have a bunch of women speeding down the freeway now, waiting for that fantasy to come true for them...LOL Where do I need to drive to find this fantasy officer for a night of play?...LOL Awesome poem I may never be the same. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh my goodness, sounds like you could write your own ticket...or did...what did happen yesterday? Love this poem, by the way! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Corazon you are so sweet and dangerous. I loved every minute of this..James |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
suthern…lol, ok I won't ditto your first statement…but the second I will, even for (or should I say especially for) a second placer I can say that he has been too scarce Lost Dreamer….lolol…was just needing a smile and you guys have done that….so thank you for the smiles Martie thank you and yesterday?...just got a call from a ghost, and had to get it to stop haunting me jmlee12345 …am glad…I really didn't know how this one would be received, am glad it made everyone smile [This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 05-04-2000).] |
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PanDol Senior Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 1245USA |
This is GREAT! I LOVE it. I wonder how many times this thought has been pondered? Well done! And Hey LD, LOL at your reply. I think you hit the nail on the head! Knowing my luck I'd geta female officer! hehe |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
thanks PanDol...glad you liked.... won't be back for a few days, so thanks all for the smiles and hugs to all |
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msstt Junior Member
since 2000-05-03
Posts 23Huntington,Ind |
Wow I really like this one.And it is something that I would really love to happen.Them men in uniform.WHOOOOOW.Tricia |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
This is great, Corazon ! And HOT !!!! Thanks for the fantasy, now running through my mind .....  Love this piece !!!! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is awesome!! Now I remember why I always loved a man in uniform....and I'm with Janet on this one Vrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrooooom!!!!! Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
So, you COULD continue this saga in the adult forum...hint, hint. I'm sure we'd love to see how everything comes out. Corinne |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
thanks all of you...glad you liked oops almost missed your question corrine...I will think about it ...but am not up to it right now...sigh.. I am off to sleep....minus 2 nights of sleep is not doing anything good for me or my poetry....lol...as you will notice in my next poem...yawn.....mmmmmmmmmmmm yawn.....zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz[This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 05-04-2000).] |
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