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I might be dangerous

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Corazon
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0 posted 05-03-2000 02:53 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Corazon

ok...lol...I probably wrote this as an escape mechanism from yesterday...and so with my mind not opeating on all cylinders I am not sure how it will go over .....but here goes *s*


I might be dangerous

the road was dark
and deserted
when in the rearview
sirens roar lights blink
and she cursed beneath her breath
until
she saw his face
entranced was she by his
all business no time for play
license and registration please
her eyes twinkled
she grabbed her fantasy quick
before he realized he was to be the
costar
and she asked
don't I look dangerous to you?
taken aback
more by what her eyes were voicing
than by her question
his mind blanked his reply
at first
somehow
he came up with an
excuse me?
but from deep inside his wanting
the attentive salute
interpreted the twinkle
before she needed to
clarify
and so he looked down
undaunted
she asked again
don't you think I look dangerous?
I would search me
if I were you...
eyes locked
in silent conversation
questions and answers traveling
in split second time
the twinkle in her eyes
and the curve of her
take me to your mouth and kiss me lips
spoke to him so loudly that
reason could no longer be heard
and he almost didn't recognize the voice
that said
maybe you should step out of the car miss
and spread them wide
she too quickly for him to change his mind
obliged
I might be dangerous she laughed again
over her shoulder
you should be thorough
with your search, that is
and she arched her firm body
into the smoothness
into the hardness
of his search
she turned to face
her fantasy...
and what he gave
she took



[This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 05-04-2000).]
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Janet Marie
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1 posted 05-03-2000 03:02 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

ah...excuse me...was gonna reply to poem...
but I suddenly feel the need for speed...
gonna go for a drive... LOL
whew...read hot like corvette Corazon...
way cool poem...
ahhh most excellent imagery  
very creative work here.
later, jm
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2 posted 05-03-2000 03:51 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Man, what I wouldn't give to be a policeman...lol
Whew....this was intence

Hey Janet, you gonna be driving in North Carolina....huh?.....I gotta go rent a policeman's uniform...lol  

All my love,
Jeffrey

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but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep
Corazon
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3 posted 05-03-2000 04:30 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

hey you two *g* did I put those ideas in your head? *innocent look*
lol....glad you enjoyed  

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ESP
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4 posted 05-03-2000 04:38 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Lol....not quite what I was expecting!!! I enjoyed it though!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


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5 posted 05-03-2000 05:12 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Corazon, with your luck, you would get a defective detective!  

Love the scenario! uh, I'd be glad Toe isn't around. He would be merciless with you, yanno???
Corazon
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6 posted 05-03-2000 05:19 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

ESP...with your name, your reply gave me a smile....glad you liked

bal....ROFG@defective detective...now doesn't that bring up an image?...and yep toe would have had fun with this one...kind of off the wall for me, but innuenduously ripe for a toerag picking  
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7 posted 05-03-2000 05:27 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Might be???? There's no question about it, O&O... you ARE dangerous! LOL

And I sure wish Toe was around to rag you! *G*
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8 posted 05-03-2000 05:28 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

What are you trying to do, your gonna have a bunch of women speeding down the freeway now, waiting for that fantasy to come true for them...LOL Where do I need to drive to find this fantasy officer for a night of play?...LOL Awesome poem I may never be the same.  
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9 posted 05-03-2000 05:32 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Oh my goodness, sounds like you could write your own ticket...or did...what did happen yesterday?  Love this poem, by the way!
JamesMichael
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10 posted 05-03-2000 05:34 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Corazon you are so sweet and dangerous.  I loved every minute of this..James
Corazon
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11 posted 05-03-2000 05:57 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

   suthern…lol, ok I won't ditto your first statement…but the second I will, even for (or should I say especially for) a second placer I can say that he has been too scarce

Lost Dreamer….lolol…was just needing a smile and you guys have done that….so thank you for the smiles  
Martie thank you   and yesterday?...just got a call from a ghost, and had to get it to stop haunting me  

jmlee12345 …am glad…I really didn't know how this one would be received, am glad it made everyone smile  


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12 posted 05-03-2000 06:07 PM       View Profile for PanDol   Email PanDol   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PanDol

This is GREAT! I LOVE it.
I wonder how many times this thought has been pondered?
Well done!

And Hey LD, LOL at your reply. I think you hit the
nail on the head!   Knowing my luck I'd get
a female officer! hehe
Corazon
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13 posted 05-04-2000 12:04 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

thanks PanDol...glad you liked....

won't be back for a few days, so thanks all for the smiles and hugs to all  
msstt
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14 posted 05-04-2000 12:10 PM       View Profile for msstt   Email msstt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for msstt

Wow I really like this one.And it is something that I would really love to happen.Them men in uniform.WHOOOOOW.Tricia
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15 posted 05-04-2000 02:15 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

This is great, Corazon !  And HOT !!!!
Thanks for the fantasy, now running through my mind .....  
Love this piece !!!!
Butterflies_dont_cry
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16 posted 05-04-2000 02:25 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

This is awesome!!  Now I remember why I always loved a man in uniform....and I'm with Janet on this one  Vrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrooooom!!!!!      

 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

Corinne
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17 posted 05-04-2000 03:04 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

So, you COULD continue this saga in the adult forum...hint, hint. I'm sure we'd love to see how everything comes out.

Corinne
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18 posted 05-04-2000 03:13 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

thanks all of you...glad you liked  
oops almost missed your question corrine...I will think about it  ...but am not up to it right now...sigh.. I am off to sleep....minus 2 nights of sleep is not doing anything good for me or my poetry....lol...as you will notice in my next poem...yawn.....mmmmmmmmmmmm yawn.....zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz


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