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Lucie
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077
Houston

0 posted 2000-05-03 01:28 PM


In case you hadn't noticed.. I've been gone.
And now I'm thinking.. perhaps it was too long.
I seem to have lost my ability to rhyme.
I hope that it returns to me in time.

But just in case it doesn't, here's the deal.
I need a special push to make me feel.

The words are there deep down inside of me.
I just need some special friends to kick me in the... hiney!!!!!     


 With perseverance even the snail reached the Ark.



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Jeffrey Carter
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State of constant confusion!
1 posted 2000-05-03 01:33 PM


Hi Lucie,
I'm still new here so I'll just say nice to meet you

And .....KICK, KICK

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

Marge Tindal
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Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
2 posted 2000-05-03 01:48 PM


Goosey, Lucie~

Goodness, gracious
been gone too long.
Now you're back ...
just sing a song.

Open up
and let it rip,
from your heart
to your fingertips.

Soon enough
you'll be feeling fine
and then your words
will start to rhyme.

Gotta run ...
what a quirk,
they pay me here
and EXPECT ME TO WORK !

Good to have you back, hon.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
3 posted 2000-05-03 01:53 PM


Lucie,
I joined this place just 8 days back, so all I can say is -

If you had gone,
Welcome back,
Now since you have come,
Don't pack your bags,
Lets hear some songs from you,
Words of wisdom, and your views.

Regards,
Sudhir

 Take each day as it comes,
Consider each day as a flight,
Try hard to succeed and fly,
Surely then you will reach some height.

But if by some chance you don’t,
Remember that tomorrow will always come.
Learn this well and learn this hard
That today’s efforts will pay for tomorrow’s fun.

A Crazy Monster, a.k.a Ski


wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
4 posted 2000-05-03 01:56 PM


lucie returns
cuz she never learns
its good to sometimes go hide

lucie in time
sees that versing rhyme
is a bike she still can ride  

Parker
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129
ON
5 posted 2000-05-03 02:26 PM


Well if you must ask,
bend over I'm up to this task,
and welcome back,
from your long sebat.....

poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
6 posted 2000-05-03 02:27 PM


oh man oh man oh man....she's back!  My inspiration, my partner in crime, my uh....SISTER!     Yeah....you go girl...er...you STAY girl!  hehehe I have been behaving soooo well, I haven't even posted in adult now for quite some time!  (shining up halo and fluffing wings)  PdV doesn't even remember me now!  hehehe  I have been such a good little girl, you are just gonna be amazed!     I'll try to come up with a good challenge for you, so you can get back on track in here.  
Corazon
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209

7 posted 2000-05-03 03:19 PM


I can't believe it....I just can't....just this very morning, I was missing you and wondering what took you away and if you would make it back.....great big welcome backs from me  
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
8 posted 2000-05-03 04:13 PM


Our Lucie's back and she really wants to party
hey nah, hey nah, our Lucie's BACK!

See Ping-Pong Poems [currently at page 2] and add a new version...I'll be waiting...

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
9 posted 2000-05-03 05:13 PM


I would be happy to kick you
Butt surely you can pen rhymes two
At once if I recall you write
A'musing everyone's delight

suthern
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Louisiana
10 posted 2000-05-03 05:21 PM


YIPPEE!! It's about time, gal... Welcome back!
Martie
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California
11 posted 2000-05-03 05:25 PM


Hi Luci, welcome back and if you can't rhyme I'll kick you into some free verse.  However you dance, this place rocks!
Lucie
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077
Houston
12 posted 2000-05-03 07:51 PM


                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      

lots and lots of smiles from me.. I really really missed you people!!!!!!!!!!!

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
13 posted 2000-05-03 08:12 PM


Lucie!!! I'm so glad to see you here!!! I won't kick you to jumpstart your inspiration, but will say I've missed your poetry here in Open and Adult...and Balladeer and Toe have been TOO quiet without you around to harass them!  
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