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Just The Morning |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Just The Morning This is it, just the morning for the gaze into my soul, because of foggy haze laying low across the land, white and gray this is the morning for the gaze. There is always a quiet reverie come to my bones in such a way as to not chill, nor to scare away any old ghosts, but come to play in all the words I had to say. Gray now the morning, misty cool, ah youth, such a vigorous fool and the tears, would fill with rain the pool of the life in which I swam of which is gone, stronger I am. This is it, just the morning for the gaze into my soul, because of foggy haze laying low across the land, white and gray this is the morning for the gaze. 3 May, 2000 ©KRJ Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Sunshine, i like the imagery of this....ah, that early morning foggy haze, and the ghosts that come to play. ~~nice writing~~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Brandyn Sand Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 82Columbia, SC |
"Gray now the morning, misty cool, ah youth, such a vigorous fool and the tears, would fill with rain the pool of the life in which I swam..." Outstanding! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
This was great! Really liked this piece a lot sunshine! "This is it, just the morning for the gaze into my soul, because of foggy haze laying low across the land, white and gray this is the morning for the gaze." Gr88888888888! take care, amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Beautiful! Simply beautiful! This must be one of my favorites in all of yours which I have read. Strikes a strong chord inside of me. So much truth, and so meticulously worded. This is wonderful. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, I see from these lovely responses I must post more spontaneously - such as I did here. This took but a nano-second to write.. 'twas a foggy morning...ta-da... You all blew me away with your fantastic comments. I am sitting here...humbly thanking you all for such delightful sentiments...thank you, thank you... |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
In my opinion the best writing is done spontaneously. I love this one by the way. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you, Jeffrey... |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is so lovely! It reminds me of the poems you wrote for a challenge I gave you when you first became a member..remember..about the seasons? Lovely, lovely poem!  |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is a lovely introspective piece, Sunshine! Very lovely! Denise |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful gaze in the haze here, Sunshine. Enjoyed the poem and the sound of it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunshine~ I like the spontaneity of this piece. Now, that's inspirational writing ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
PdV, how can I forget the challenges you give me...and the hope you inspire within me? E-mail me soon...the address I have for you keeps bouncing back at me... denise, this was only introspective haze...he he...thank you!... Martie, thank you for enjoying... Marge, inspiration strikes at the strangest times...thank you... Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sunshine, This is brautiful, you have done a wonderful job, thank you for sharing. Cerenity |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Cerenity, you are becoming a faithful reader, and that pleases me much... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice Writing!!!!!!!!! |
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