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daft
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0 posted 05-03-2000 10:32 AM       View Profile for daft   Email daft   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for daft

There used to be an us
Now there no longer is
The temperature rose
To a great extent
Slowly we melted
Creating a pure figure
And one we shall remain
The existence is forever more
Something completely real & true
In a world full of deception & lies
An eternal bliss
That was started by a simple kiss
An everlasting connection
That no words could ever define
It will remain a secret
Hidden deep within thyself
Throughout the end of time

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Denise
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1 posted 05-03-2000 11:19 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Those connections always remain forever in our hearts. This is another sad yet lovely poem.

Denise
Sudhir Iyer
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since 04-26-2000
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2 posted 05-03-2000 11:36 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Well, I do not actually find this sad. It is a nice portrayal of life.

We are like pieces of wax, which on making a connections, discover the passions of love, oneness and friendship. The soul is stirred and we become united as one. The inanimate pieces are transformed into a unique caricature, a work of art, open for admiration. This connection is that which is there "forever".

I enjoyed this piece, daft.

Thanks for sharing,
sudhir

 Take each day as it comes,
Consider each day as a flight,
Try hard to succeed and fly,
Surely then you will reach some height.

But if by some chance you don’t,
Remember that tomorrow will always come.
Learn this well and learn this hard
That today’s efforts will pay for tomorrow’s fun.

A Crazy Monster, a.k.a Ski

mete out
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3 posted 05-04-2000 05:09 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***daft,
this poem is very touching.
love is  awonderful thing, to have experienced it can be one of the best things in life, it can also be one of the most heartbreaking.
this poem in some ways is sad, but i found it uplifting,

"And one we shall remain
The existence is forever more
Something completely real & true
In a world full of deception & lies"

nicely done.


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


tracie66
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4 posted 05-04-2000 05:14 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

daft~
I really liked this and I too didn't find it sad. A very enjoyable read thanks for sharing  
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


JamesMichael
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5 posted 05-04-2000 06:32 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I enjoyed reading this..."an everlasting connection..perhaps this explains why I like to keep pictures of my old girlfriends around...it makes me feel comfortable and connected...I even have the picture of my girlfriend that I took to the senior prom.  James
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