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Rain Song
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Rain Song |
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Forrest Cain Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 306Chas.,W.V. USA |
Rain Song if I could see the woodwinds upon the valley drawn if I could read the mountains that calls the night to dawn then I could climb the waters decending like a song into the evening shadows upon the skies...beyond |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Forrest; Breathtaking, reads like a song! Ellie 02 [This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 05-03-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Forrest~ VERY pretty. Lilting and lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You've painted a lovely picture in my mind with this Forrest! Very beautiful! Denise |
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warmhrt Senior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563 |
Forrest, You have a great deal of talent...your words paint wonderful images. Looks like we're both taking a little foray out of CA. Very nice, Forrest. Kris the poet's pen...gives to airy nothing A local habitation and a name ~ Shakespeare |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Forrest, This is breath taking, just lovely poetry here, enjoyed very much. Cerenity |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
This was lovely! It took me right there, and with such beautiful rhymes. I loved it! What a feeling it gives! |
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