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**Moonbeams**
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**Moonbeams** |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Pliant dreams of cascading moon beams- Shooting heavenward and past, Fluorescent light, of memories sight- Not one solemn dream to last. Just Fantasies Wish, in Forever’s Kiss- That ended one day too soon, Tears of the Saint, can’t compensate- As I endlessly pray to the moon. Brightness I grasp, behind smile’s mask- Daring just one to step up, Create total bliss, upon such lonesome lips- Devouring hurt’s open lust. No stinging recollection in misconception- As throbbing fades utterly away, Show me laughter unending, truth unbending- Completion, the honest way. Just a little prayer, to help get me there- Where granted, are heartfelt dreams, Yet I stand in wait, upon solitaire’s gate- Wishing toward the cascading moonbeams… Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*sigh* Devina, you really got me with this one. . . I can feel the longing and the sadness in this one. . . "No stinging recollection in misconception- As throbbing fades utterly away, Show me laughter unending, truth unbending- Completion, the honest way." We all long to have this completion. . . with no strings. . . just honest. . . a love that's pure. . . keep looking. . . it's out there. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
My gosh, m'sis, I only THOUGHT I was blushing before---as my heart is cut-- seems yours bleeds more...all is as it should be tho...As I always close, Love to Ya.... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WoW girl you sure do know how to write, this was something else. This totally inspired me  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Even sadness would feel honoured with this one. Liked these lines most "Create total bliss, upon such lonesome lips- Devouring hurt’s open lust" BTW, a vagrant maybe stupid thought - Lips are in pairs, so how come they are lonesome? Regards, Enjoyed this one for sure! Sudhir Take each day as it comes, Consider each day as a flight, Try hard to succeed and fly, Surely then you will reach some height. But if by some chance you don’t, Remember that tomorrow will always come. Learn this well and learn this hard That today’s efforts will pay for tomorrow’s fun. A Crazy Monster, a.k.a Ski |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beautiful!! The yearning and sadness are flowing out of it in the most wonderful way. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ah, little Devina~ What an awesome poem. Capturing lost moonbeams ... elusive dreams. Smiles will come again to rest on your lips. And oh, how they will light up your life This was wonderful, hon. *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ a/k/a ~*Ms. Priss* ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A lovely and soul filled rendition ... may your prayers be answered. Beautifully written and heartfelt, /Kit McCallum |
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FadingSun Member
since 2000-05-01
Posts 76Southern California |
Devina, Truly inspirational lyric. As I read into your longing, I could not help but glance out my window at that moon. ~S |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Sven-Me thinks to search an eternity before I actually find such honest love...but...I'll settle for knowing it's out there, scince you said it..  serenity- I always feel better knowing you're waiting with a hug sis...  Here's love to both of us!!!tracie- glad to be someone's inspiration these days, now I feel a whole lot better!! Sudhir- Just because they're a pair...doesn't mean they are whole...just a thought...I thank you.. Lizzie- thanks hun...you've read me like a book!! Marge- *giggling* at you Miss Priss!!! But seriously, I await the day that you speak of so much hun...never had much patience..hehe And as you can tell, I was in a fanciful mood this eve... Love to you!!! Kit- Thank you so much!!! I hope you're enjoying passions!!! FadingSun- That's usually where I go to write in the evenings..beautiful, isn't it?? Thank you.. Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
"Tears of the Saint, can’t compensate -" Very intriguing line, D. Love the poem - can relate well to the wishing... Michael [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 05-03-2000).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely and wistful, Devina. Corinne |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
course i cant agrre that one should pray to the moon tiz a very beautiful wistful poem there |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
devina, well I love the whole poem... but Create total bliss, upon such lonesome lips- Devouring hurt’s open lust. kinda trips my intrigue.... devouring is such a hungrey word, don't you think. Parker |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Michael-yep, each line does seem to have it's own hidden meaning in my mind...are you peeking??? Corinne-thank you hun... Walt-Now you know God's at the top of my list...the moon comes later!!! James- To answer your question dear...maybe I was just hungry...  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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