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She Forgot To Take Her Memory

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GOETHE
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25 posted 05-04-2000 09:09 PM       View Profile for GOETHE   Email GOETHE   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GOETHE

good job.  hehe.  keep it up.

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WhiteNite
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26 posted 05-04-2000 09:11 PM       View Profile for WhiteNite   Email WhiteNite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhiteNite's Home Page   View IP for WhiteNite

Very cool Jeff!  I've been there before and you described it perfectly.  I like the title... "She forgot to take her memory"  perfect... =)  Thanks man, Dave

 "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment.
Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott


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27 posted 05-04-2000 09:12 PM       View Profile for desperado   Email desperado   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for desperado

nice work jeff!  I liked this one.  of course I am a melancholy poet at heart, so I'm biased.  hehe  good work to you though.  

 "There were times in my life
when I was going insane
tryin to walk through
the pain
when I lost my grip
and I hit the floor
yeah I thought I could leave but couldn't get out the door" - Aerosmith "Amazing"
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28 posted 05-05-2000 12:05 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

I am very much overwhelmed by all the replies this got. I love you guys, everyone!
It is through you that I get my inspiration.
Reading all your wonderful poetry has taught me alot about my writing, and I am very grateful. Thank you all for being so supportive.

Love to you all,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep
canada
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29 posted 05-05-2000 06:38 PM       View Profile for canada   Email canada   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for canada

man your poem was written very wounderfuly and i'm glad i got this chance to read it
Zelda
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30 posted 05-05-2000 11:22 PM       View Profile for Zelda   Email Zelda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zelda

Very haunting piece you have here.
Love's ghost lerking...
Nicely written thoughts.
Z
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31 posted 05-05-2000 11:25 PM       View Profile for Tia   Email Tia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tia

This is a wonderful poem Jeffery. keep writing from the bottom of your heart.
Tia

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DiObear
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32 posted 05-05-2000 11:30 PM       View Profile for DiObear   Email DiObear   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DiObear

Jeffrey,

I'd have to agree with so many who have already written their comments... this should have music to go with it.  Maybe some sweet notes would even help to ease the pain.

Very nice poem.

Sue
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33 posted 05-08-2000 10:34 AM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosebud1229

very beautiful, I do believe I heard a song like this.. Memories like the corners of my mind... memories also help us in looking ahead to more memories lest we forget. hehe Isn't it ironic.. I believe that's a song too.

 
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