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*~Juliet~*
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since 2000-05-02
Posts 19
Key West

0 posted 2000-05-02 08:07 PM



                    

The very first day I saw you,
I knew we were meant to be,
And I knew I had to have you,
For the rest of eternity.
The glittering sparkle in your eyes,
Shimmering brighter than all the stars in the sky,
Luminates my heart with ecstasy,
Like a bright light in complete darkness.
The comforting smile you flash at me,
Lifts my pensive heart into bliss,
And whenever I'm around you,
My life is consumate.
You bring ebuillience to my life,
Like a rainbow through the storm;
You keep me in euphoria,
Like a candle that never burns.
We should be together forever,
In our own intangible fantasy,
Lovers, like Romeo and Juliet,
Whose hearts will always yearn. *



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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-05-02 08:14 PM


Welcome to Passions, Juliet! This is so romantic and beautiful! Please check your e-mail for a special welcome!

Denise

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
2 posted 2000-05-03 09:00 PM


Hi Juliet,

This is beautiful my dear, your heart speaks of love, I hope your dreams come true.

WELCOME TO PASSIONS,

Cerenity

netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
3 posted 2000-05-03 11:04 PM


Hi Juliet -- Welcome to Passions.

What a pretty poem to start out with.
Oh, to have such love -- good luck
to you

netswan

Marge Tindal
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since 1999-11-06
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4 posted 2000-05-04 06:55 AM


Juliet~
Welcome to the family of Passionate poets.
Enjoyed reading your first post.
Looking forward to more.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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