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*~Intangible Fantasy~*

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*~Juliet~*
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The very first day I saw you,
I knew we were meant to be,
And I knew I had to have you,
For the rest of eternity.
The glittering sparkle in your eyes,
Shimmering brighter than all the stars in the sky,
Luminates my heart with ecstasy,
Like a bright light in complete darkness.
The comforting smile you flash at me,
Lifts my pensive heart into bliss,
And whenever I'm around you,
My life is consumate.
You bring ebuillience to my life,
Like a rainbow through the storm;
You keep me in euphoria,
Like a candle that never burns.
We should be together forever,
In our own intangible fantasy,
Lovers, like Romeo and Juliet,
Whose hearts will always yearn. *


© Copyright 2000 Carly - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 05-02-2000 08:14 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Juliet! This is so romantic and beautiful! Please check your e-mail for a special welcome!

Denise
Cerenity
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Hi Juliet,

This is beautiful my dear, your heart speaks of love, I hope your dreams come true.

WELCOME TO PASSIONS,

Cerenity
netswan
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since 03-28-2000
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3 posted 05-03-2000 11:04 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Hi Juliet -- Welcome to Passions.

What a pretty poem to start out with.
Oh, to have such love -- good luck
to you

netswan
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4 posted 05-04-2000 06:55 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Juliet~
Welcome to the family of Passionate poets.
Enjoyed reading your first post.
Looking forward to more.
~*Marge*~


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