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Open Poetry #7

The Outsider

Wet
Member

since 1999-07-25

Posts 60
Brentwood, Tn

0 posted 2000-05-02 07:58 PM

The Outsider

I stare outside into the crowd of humanity
As I look in,
I watch as they live a meaningless life.
Peace and openminds,
Do not exist in this world of syncrinized thoughts.
I push my self away,
So I do not get caught,
Among all this trouble.
This trouble of madness.
This evil lurking among the minds of helpless slaves.
There are only a few left,
A few that think for themselves...
They are the Outsiders,
And I am one of them.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-05-02 08:21 PM

I like this, Wet. Nice to know there are still a few of us around!

Denise

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

2 posted 2000-05-03 09:34 PM

Hi Wet,

This is good, your concept here is wonderful I haven't looked at it this way before, I really like this makes me think.

Thank you,

Cereinty

Jeffrey Carter

Member Elite

since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

3 posted 2000-05-03 09:38 PM

Ah...beautiful, thought provoking poetry

All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

Dawn Eclipse
Senior Member

since 2000-01-31

Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula

4 posted 2000-05-03 10:13 PM

Beautiful poem, no better words for it.

"Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*

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