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Spring They Say

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Beki
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Spring They Say

Spring they say
yet still the trace
of winter's frosty morning cold.
I bury myself naked
beneath the comfort
of your warm welcome shoulder.
This sheltering love
is against everything
I believe in, yet
I would not break free
even if I could.

Colored bottles
along the windowsill
cast rainbows of hope
on our bedroom wall.
Spring they say,
yet divided from winter
only by a date
on the calendar.




[This message has been edited by Beki (edited 05-02-2000).]
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1 posted 05-02-2000 04:53 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Beki, spring they say is always looked forward to, but summer is what I desire.
Great poem, really enjoyed

Parker
Beki
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2 posted 05-02-2000 06:22 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

Thank you Parker    My own personal favorite season is fall but I love the spring too.
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3 posted 05-02-2000 07:40 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautifully done, Beki!  

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Thank you Denise  
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Very nice, Beki - I've got to say that spring is the best for me - I love all that fresh new green life everywhere - and having summer to look forward to...
Beki
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That's what I love about Spring too...green is my favorite color  Thanks for reading Nan
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7 posted 05-03-2000 01:02 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Beki,
I could feel the emotion in this piece. Makes me want to crawl back in bed with the love of my life.

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep
Danny Holloway
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Warm beach days are coming....according to the calendar.  Even those cool, chilly mornings walking on the beach can be exhilarating!
Nice poem Beki~~~
Beki
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I love beach spring and fall beach weather more than any other, Danny, that's why I live here! Summer means tourists mucking up my beach so I amnot a huge fan, but spring mornings and evenings walking by the sea are the best! As is fall....weather much the same both times, cool ams and evenings with awesome breezes , warm days...wonderful!

Thanks for reading, my friend  
A.C.Turner
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Great work. I love the flow. Winter is my favorite although I love spring because the earth reawakens from dormancy. Thanks. ACT.
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Thank you for reading, AC  
 
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