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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Tempest Faced again with thoughts that vex us daily, We try to calm this tempest in our heads. This tired, trying task that impacts greatly, The peace we seek, and sends discord instead. For you I weep, your pain must soon depart, Partake,my sweet of new and vibrant life. With relished fire, refresh, renew, restart, And claim anew these joys so real and rife. Let our love survive yet also strengthen, Our firm resolve to stand triumphantly. Shortened days of joy may now be lengthened, While days of pain are viewed most distantly. As storm clouds must abate,your love denied Must flower from the tears your eyes have cried. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Let our love survive yet also strengthen, Our firm resolve to stand triumphantly. Shortened days of joy may now be lengthened, While days of pain are viewed most distantly. As storm clouds must abate,your love denied Must flower from the tears your eyes have cried. -------------- ONLY poetry calms the tempest in my head... and your does that well. this is excellent and thought provoking. The last lines are perfection. So how did ya get so good at this anyway  take care sonnet-man *S* jm |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
David - this is another incredible piece, my friend! Your poetry touches me deeply, and I always look forward to your next post. Keep up the good work!  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, David, please keep it up! I can't get enought of your beautifully done sonnets!  Denise |
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Denise
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