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You've Seen Me

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DiObear
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since 04-30-2000
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Switzerland


0 posted 05-02-2000 10:13 AM       View Profile for DiObear   Email DiObear   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DiObear

Youíve seen my morning face
with sleep in the corners of my eyes
and yet you look at me with a smile
to let me know that Iím beautiful.

Youíve seen my waking dreams
with all the colors I can I paint
and yet you gently encourage me
to fly higher than even I can see.

Youíve seen my childish fears
with all their absurd roots
and yet you stand beside me
to hold a light in the darkness.

Youíve seen the depths of my grief
with enough tears to fill a stadium
and yet you hold my head to your chest
to help me squeeze out as many as I can.

Youíve seen the core of who I am
with all the eccentricities I try to hide
and yet you evoke a desire in me
to be everything I am and more.

© Copyright 2000 DiObear - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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since 09-21-1999
Posts 28608
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1 posted 05-02-2000 10:32 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

It must be wonderful to be so cared for!!  Lovely poem.
SpitFire
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since 04-19-2000
Posts 2428


2 posted 05-02-2000 10:46 AM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~I truly enjoyed this read.  It's wonderful that you have someone who sees ALL that you are and accepts and loves you for every bit.  It's wonderful...you're lucky...and BTW, you write really well...great post.
DiObear
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Posts 68
Switzerland


3 posted 05-02-2000 10:59 AM       View Profile for DiObear   Email DiObear   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DiObear

Martie and Spitfire,

Thanks for the kind words.  I actually have two friends that I wrote this about.  Guess I'm very lucky!

DiObear
daft
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4 posted 05-02-2000 11:51 AM       View Profile for daft   Email daft   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for daft

I enjoyed reading your poetry, it has a lot of truth & it was very well writen. It's just too bad that everyone can't be that way.
You are very luck to have such people who care about you so much.
TerryW
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since 03-23-2000
Posts 787
Louisville, Mississippi, USA


5 posted 05-02-2000 12:00 PM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

DiOBear,
    What a lovely poem!  I know that having someone that you can trust this much is a very wonderful thing.  I really loved reading it!


Great Work!      

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
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6 posted 05-02-2004 09:38 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

someone to share everything with...nice write
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