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A.C.Turner
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0 posted 2000-05-02 08:46 AM


We reach,
we decide,
pant in stolen lace,
feel orgasmic vision,
taste the salt
before the wound receives it,
and the mirror validates,
psychotic reflection
shrouding silent pain,
that never heaves.

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2000-05-02 02:56 PM


Bit scary here A.C., but I LIKE scary...just wish someone would have told me that I was supposed to have a method BEFORE the madness--hee--hee--hee....
hsystems
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2 posted 2000-05-02 03:05 PM


A.C., in a word - excellent!  Welcome to Passions!


Troy

 Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry
http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm



Corazon
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3 posted 2000-05-02 03:43 PM


this is great...for me it took a couple of readings to digest....but it feels good inside...*s* I like it!
ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....
4 posted 2000-05-02 04:01 PM


This one also took me a couple of read thru's to get the meaning of it.....and I like, I like alot!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

A.C.Turner
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5 posted 2000-05-02 08:30 PM


Thanks Hsystems, Corazon and Esp. This is one of my disturbing pieces. Everyone that reads it gets something different out of it. It is scary to know that there are people like this. However I believe that even disturbing and scary subjects deserve a poem. Thanks for reading and commenting. Peace to you all. ACT.
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