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Shadow's Secret |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho 
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~ ~ ~ So what has shadow whispered at the dawning unto you - has she hinted at the dusk, and has she murmured of the dew? ~ ~ ~ She meets me before sunrise as the skies so slowly light - and I wonder just what mystery she’ll show me ‘fore the night? ~ ~ ~ She creeps across the meadows while the sun peeks over hills - she’s the lifeline of the springtime - she’s the shade of daffodils.. ~ ~ ~ So has the shadow kissed you with her magic and her sighs? Well, in case that feeling’s missed you - it’s the glow of paradise! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Enchanting song of shadow here---wish I'd thought of it--quite jealous now... I am a shadow person too--absolutely loved this...it is, well, Serene... |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
WOW... my darling, why do you spring these on me... and now your tucked in bed. There's way to many thoughts you've left dangling in my head. I think if you do this again I'm going to wake you up instead... of sitting here wandering through my dreamy head. Sleep tight my dearest sweet.< !signature--> If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley) [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 05-02-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is deeply enchanting...well done, Rosemary. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rosemary~ An enchanted way to start my morning. You are blessed with the kiss of the faeries of the dawn. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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A.C.Turner Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 83Reading, Pa.Home of Bardfest |
Such beauty to wake up to. The imagery is so beautiful. I love shadows too! ACT. [This message has been edited by A.C.Turner (edited 05-02-2000).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Rosemary, you have touched me with the fine lacy tecture of a tree in shadow...and it is so beautiful! |
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DiObear Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 66Switzerland |
Rosemary --- You wrote this so well that I could see the shadows as I read your poem. It's beautiful. DiObear |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I do so enjoy your works ....another heartfelt piece  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rosemary, You have beautiful shadows. A wonderful poem. *L* |
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Grace Junior Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 19 |
Rosemary What a beautiful poem to get lost in. |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
serenity lucky Sunshine Marge A.C.Turner Martie DiObear hoot_owl_rn Seymour Tabin Grace I'm amazed at all your comments this morning! I had gotten up to write this in the night, and just decided to share it. I never dreamed it would speak to anyone at all. What a treat! I really appreciate it! Thank you so much! ~ ~ ~ [This message has been edited by Rosemary J. Gwaltney (edited 05-02-2000).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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