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lucky
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0 posted 2000-05-01 08:42 PM




[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 06-01-2000).]
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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-05-01 09:08 PM


Oh, Lucky~
This is just enchanting.
It is so mellow and so YOU !
I'm enthused at the read.
My goodness ... you're sure in touch
with a wonderful inner-self.
In case I didn't make it clear
I LIKE IT !  
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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lucky
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Idaho
2 posted 2000-05-01 09:47 PM


Marge,

Your such a darling... maybe you could come up with something like "Girls_After_School" for a challenge. I bet you remember a few. HAHA. Thank you soooooo much.

 If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley)

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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northern mountains, Idaho
3 posted 2000-05-02 12:26 PM


Hey, Honey, Husband, I'd have to move on down to the adult forum, if I were to respond to this one!  You know where you lead my mind when you talk like this!
- ha ha - I can't help myself...  but it's YOUR fault! "warm candled dreams" - " tongues of secret thymes" - oh, man, --- ... never mind.  Hey, we've got to put our clothes back on, we're in public!!&!!!


Martie
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4 posted 2000-05-02 12:32 PM


lucky, marvelous trip on blood brown grass--and Rosemary, you painted a different trip entirely...love you guys!
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