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X Angel
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since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon

0 posted 2000-05-01 01:07 PM


My oldest son originally brought this template home as a school assignment and I fell in love with it!
So neurotic am I about sharing things that I think worthwhile I typed the dratted thing in wordpad and copy and pasted it to here. Thanks Ali for starting this again...I'll post last year's version and then see if I can muster up a new one for this year...
                   ~X~

I am a dreamer and a poet
I wonder if there were ever really Unicorns
I hear a brook babbling in an ancient forest
I see a handsome prince on a majestic steed
I want to ride there too, among the trees
I am a dreamer and a poet

I pretend that I can feel the power of the horse underneath me
I feel the wind blowing through my hair
I touch the warmth of the horse's skin
I worry that this dream might really end
I cry upon waking and realizing it was just an elusive wisp of imagination
I am a dreamer and a poet

I understand that I must live in reality, not fantasy
I say that life is what we make of it
I dream of faraway places, and magical isles
I try to write beautiful sonnets about what's utmost upon my heart
I hope to write, someday, of my deepest desire
I am a dreamer and a poet

© Copyright 2000 Heather Walters - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-05-01 04:13 PM


Thanks for sharing this, Heather, it is very beautiful!

Denise

Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
2 posted 2000-05-01 05:56 PM


Geesh..I leave for a few days and you guys get to have all the fun. I miss my home computer.  
Anyways
I did like this poem.


 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 2000-05-01 06:11 PM


You are a dreamer and a poet... and a very special one at that, X-Angel.  This is soft and beautiful...  I'm so glad this challenge resurfaced - it shows side to all of us that otherwise mught no be known.  TY  And of course there really were unicorns...

Michael



netswan
Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
4 posted 2000-05-01 06:25 PM


Hi Angel.  Great to meet you. I love
horses and I love your poem.

I am with Michael -- unicorns and magical
things are real and alive as long as we have writers, tale spinners,  to tell of them

People like you.

netswan

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
5 posted 2000-05-01 06:29 PM


Thank you for originally showing us all this 'template' and for reposting this very fine answer to it! I especially liked these lines,

"I worry that this dream might really end
I cry upon waking and realizing it was just an elusive wisp of imagination"

Can't wait to read your new one!

Alicat
Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094
Coastal Texas
6 posted 2000-05-01 06:34 PM


Again, Heather, XAngel, beautiful job.  *smiles* And soon we'll have coffee...  


Alicat

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

7 posted 2000-05-01 06:56 PM


I cry upon waking and realizing it was just an elusive wisp of imagination
I am a dreamer and a poet

I understand that I must live in reality, not fantasy
I say that life is what we make of it
I dream of faraway places, and magical isles
I try to write beautiful sonnets about what's utmost upon my heart
I hope to write, someday, of my deepest desire
I am a dreamer and a poet
-------
Im so glad you posted this for all of us who werent here before...
and its perfect...
thanks for sharing this and the idea
and thanks again to ALI CAT for the challenge
it made for a very inspirational and enjoyable weekend here...
take care, jm


Honeybee
Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
8 posted 2000-05-01 07:11 PM


Well you certainly are a poet, a talented and imaginative one at that!  Excellent piece for the challenge, you exceded it!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

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