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Cerenity
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0 posted 2000-05-01 11:37 AM



Earth A Gift From Our Creator


I hear whisperings in the winds they
are giving blessings to those who
listen, saying be in awe of her beauty
for she has been blessed by the master.

See her majestic mountain ranges
reach for the heavens as if to give
praise to her maker.  

Hear the rush of the waves, crashing
against ragged rock masses  jetting
upward out of the seas.

Sift your hands through the sands
of time, feel its heat upon your skin,
know your stay may end your travels
if not protected from its heated ferry.

Tread ever so gently through the forest
vegetation so as to not disturb its life
sustaining forces.

See as the fawn sees with eyes cautious
to the moves of predators, sing marry
tunes with the canary, or run like the
wind as the cheetah.  

See the delight of the apple tree and
know its sweetness. Pick a rose feel the
softness of its pedals and know this is
how loving our creator is.

Pay due attention to the whisperings
in the wind for they speak to the meek
of heart. Those that love the gifts life
has blessed them with so freely.

Most of all give thanks for those who form
the circle of your life, for these souls have
been blessed by the creator directly and
shall inherit that which remains after
your passing.

The earth was a free gift from one that
there is no comparison and we must keep
are stand firm to protect that which was
given to sustain are life force.

Remember listen to the whisperings
they speak of you.


By,   Cerenity


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Denise
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1 posted 2000-05-01 04:17 PM


Oh, Cerenity, the sentiments in this are so lovely and so widsom filled! Very very nice!

Denise

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2 posted 2000-05-01 08:36 PM


A beautiful reminder of how precious life is.
Thanks! ACT.

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3 posted 2000-05-01 08:46 PM


Cerenity~
Oh ... I believe this is your
most beautiful piece to date.  
It speaks softly with vivid images of abundant life.

'Most of all give thanks for those who form
the circle of your life, for these souls have been blessed by the creator directly and shall inherit that which remains after
your passing.'

So very, very beautiful are your thoughts.
I just enjoyed it so very, very much.
~*Marge*~




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