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Rip Ovidio Cruz
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Ruby New Member
since 2000-04-27
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NEVER AGAIN I've never met anyone like you, Someone who makes me feel like you do, Make me feel happy, Make me feel pride. I took for granted the way you acted, I took for granted the things you said, No one else has treated me this way, No one else says the things you said. But now you're gone, I miss the way you were, There was nothing I could do to make you stay, I hadn't realized how long you have been gone. But now I want you back, Knowing you are gone, But now it's too late. Too late to chill with you, Too late to trip with you, Too late to cry with you. And now I can't say what I wanted to, And now I can't do what I needed to, And things will never be how they were then, Never will they be, Never again. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Hopping first post, enjoyed th read. Never say never though...... looking for more, from your. Oh yes and what does the listing mean... RIP OVIDIO CRUZ Parker [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 05-01-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Ruby! This is a very pain filled poem. Loss and grief are painful emotions. You've expressed them well in this. Please check your e-mail for a special welcome! Denise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lots of feelings and emotions in this poem. I know what you mean...I'm trying to take advantage of each moment as far as love goes...before the opportunities pass by...and we are only left with regrets. It's a learning process. James |
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