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Tess
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since 2000-03-22
Posts 288
Australia

0 posted 2000-05-01 07:58 AM



I am known and unknowing,
The darkness in the light,
I am the gentle breeze blowing,
The moonlight in the night.

I am alone amongst a crowd,
Fulfilled with friendship on my own,
I am loving hands and kisses soft,
The heart within my home.

I am longing for the impossible,
Looking for dreams in cold reality,
I am what I do, I am what I say,
For love I'll search eternity.


 "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time
that you've never had it before."
~author unknown~



© Copyright 2000 Tess - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

1 posted 2000-05-01 08:06 AM


wow! what a testimony. A pleasure to know you! wonderful words.

 Kathleen
indy31_99@yahoo.com



ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-05-01 09:38 AM


This is lovely....you sound like a wonderful person!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Alicat
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094
Coastal Texas
3 posted 2000-05-01 06:11 PM


Tess, this is simply beautiful, with tight rhyme scheme, and heartspoken words of personal insight...Thank you for allowing me to meet you.


Alicat

netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
4 posted 2000-05-01 06:21 PM


Hi Tess,  - this is lovely --
And what a lovely person you are.

I am glad to meet you.

netswan

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2000-05-01 06:34 PM


I am what I do...I am what I say...for love I'll search eternity...very touching and revealing.   Good luck in your search.  James
Sven
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6 posted 2000-05-01 11:19 PM


Tess, this is quite good. . . and I do believe that you've met this challenge very well!!

Excellent and glad to meet you!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
7 posted 2000-05-02 01:05 AM


Tess, this is a wonderful poem. You met the challenge with grace.... nice to meet you.  
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

8 posted 2000-05-02 07:54 AM


Tess,
this is LOVELY.
you did a wonderful job on this...
very well written and expressed

>>I am known and unknowing,
The darkness in the light,
I am the gentle breeze blowing,
The moonlight in the night.<<

that is beautiful!!!!!
very nice...VERY



 ~as always, Take Care,JM~
--------------
I know it's been a long road
To get these towns behind me and I
Will gladly reap what we may sow--
I am there for you ...
and you're there for me ...
Are you waiting for
Heart in hand
Woman and man
See me where I stand I am
Heart
Heart in hand
~vertical horizon~


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