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Looking into my Sweethearts Eyes

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JamesMichael
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0 posted 05-01-2000 06:40 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

Looking into my Sweethearts Eyes

As for my love life I have no success stories to tell.
Too many failed relationships and heartbreaks have not served who I am so well.
I can only have hope that in the future I will have stories of love and laughter to share
and I will send them out with all my love to all those who truly care.
But wait...Something good happened just last night.
I'm pretty sure I saw the beginning of love in my sweethearts precious eyes.
At first she almost made me cry cause she said she didn't trust me and she wanted to look me right in my eyes.
But I had a logical explanation and as I spilled out my heart her eyes seemed to say...give me your love...don't go away.
Each and every look from her eyes that night was wanted and needed and filled me with delight.
Yes these are the looks I have so deeply desired.
And the eyes that are setting my once lonely heart on fire.
I had so much fun in my sweethearts care...
with her sweetness and my pleasure we made quite a lovely pair.
And everytime I looked into her eyes it gave me new hope that love still survives.
It seemed as if her eyes were saying give me some of that love that I feel
and I knew that my eyes were saying...you better believe that I will.
No doubt all these feelings of pleasure will soon be wonderful memories for me and my love to treasure.
I Love your eyes Lena.

Jameslee@April30,2000






[This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 05-07-2000).]
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tracie66
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1 posted 05-01-2000 06:46 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

James~
This is so sweet   I hope you have shown this to her cause I'm sure she would love to read it and know that thats how you feel  
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Kit McCallum
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2 posted 05-01-2000 06:53 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Such hope and desire! I truly believe there are no failures in love ... only lessons and more adventures. What a delightful verse.
/Kit McCallum
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3 posted 05-01-2000 08:50 AM       View Profile for Tess   Email Tess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tess's Home Page   View IP for Tess

Nothing like looking into the eyes of someone and seeing the love reflected there.
These were beautiful thoughts, from a poem that started on a seemingly negative point. Thanks for sharing this with us  

 "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time
that you've never had it before."
~author unknown~


JamesMichael
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4 posted 05-01-2000 04:42 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Tracie, Kit, and Tess for reading and your wonderful comments.   Lena will see this soon...I have been sharing poetry with her for awhile...so right...there is nothing like looking into the eyes of love.   James
Marina
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5 posted 05-01-2000 05:51 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

With a these wonderful poems you write about Lena, I can't believe she hasn't fallen straight into your arms forever.

Marina
Alicat
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6 posted 05-01-2000 06:21 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

Congratulations James!  I truly hope things work out between you and Lena...Lord knows, you deserve it.


Alicat
JamesMichael
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Thanks Marina...I think it is happening...we can never escape the need for both hearts to have the same feelings and at the same time.
Thanks Alicat that makes two of us and I hope she feels the same way about me.  James
JamesMichael
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8 posted 05-07-2000 05:11 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I spent a little time with Lena last night and it was fun...we talked stories and sang Karaoke.   I reread this poem and decided to retitle it "Looking into my Sweethearts Eyes."   So not a new poem...just a new title.   James
lorilockheart
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9 posted 05-07-2000 05:31 PM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

James,

I love the last line.  Those few words are amazingly powerful, and they just melted my heart.  Any woman wants to hear that.
Please share this with her.
Lori


JamesMichael
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10 posted 05-08-2000 08:43 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Lori...I appreciate your melted heart and I promise Lena will get a copy of this.  I have given her lots of my poems and especially she will get this one because it was written only for her.  I told her the other night that she was the most beautiful woman on this whole island...do you think I like her?  I'm putting all my poems together in a book or folder with pictures and everything...I have about 80 poems and Lena will get a copy of that soon.   James
JamesMichael
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11 posted 05-25-2004 01:36 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I saw Lena about a month ago...after not seeing her for at least a year...she always looks exactly the same...James
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12 posted 05-25-2004 05:23 PM       View Profile for Michelle_loves_Mike   Email Michelle_loves_Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michelle_loves_Mike

Such a touching work, from the sadness, to the feeling of loves hope, so much can be found with in the eyes of the one you need, love, adore, as my signature proclaims, I enjoyed this work so very much, thank you for sharing it.

Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

 
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