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Lone Wolf
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Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2000-05-01 12:29 PM


I am a woman of many talents and loves
I wonder what the future will hold for me
I hear the whisper of the harvest moon
I see angels I have heard singing sweet songs
I want to find the one I'll love for all time
I am a woman of many talents and loves

I pretend that I am a famous writer
I feel the angels are watching over me
I touch the face of the man on the moon
I worry that there will always be violence in the world
I cry when I think of my mother who died eight years ago
I am a woman of many talents and loves

I understand that things happen for a reason
I say that fate guides our lives
I dream of a love strong and true
I try to do what is right
I hope that I find happiness
I am a woman of many talents and loves


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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Jeffrey Carter
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1 posted 2000-05-01 12:37 PM


Nice to meet you!
Great insight into who you are.
Very well said.

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

Lone Wolf
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2 posted 2000-05-01 12:39 PM


Jeffrey,
Nice to meet you too!  Thank you very much!
LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Jeffrey Carter
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3 posted 2000-05-01 12:54 PM






[This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 05-01-2000).]

Alicat
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4 posted 2000-05-01 02:12 AM


Lone Wolf, this is both sad and wonderous, all wrapped in one person...thank you for taking the time to answer this challenge.  It was a rare treat getting to know you better.


Alicat

Lone Wolf
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5 posted 2000-05-01 08:51 PM


Alicat, thank you.  I am all that and more wrapped in one person.  You are welcome for answering the challenge....thank you for posting it.  I had fun.  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

netswan
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since 2000-03-28
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6 posted 2000-05-01 09:08 PM


Hi Lone Wolf !

I was hoping you would take this challenge.
This is truly beautiful ---
You have written it so well.

Glad to see more insights into your sweet
soul.


netswan

Lone Wolf
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7 posted 2000-05-01 09:13 PM


Hi netswan!

Yes, I did....thanks for telling me about it!!  It was fun to write.  Glad you liked it....it is how i am!!!  

Awww.....that was sweet!!

Lone Wolf


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Poet deVine
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8 posted 2000-05-01 09:21 PM


This is great! Nice to meet you...I love this challenge!  
Lone Wolf
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9 posted 2000-05-01 09:27 PM


Poet deVine......thank you!!  Nice to meet you too!!  Fun challenge!!  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Sven
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10 posted 2000-05-01 11:12 PM


Very well done LW. . .it's nice to meet you!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


TearsFromHeaven
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since 2000-04-28
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Louisville, Mississippi, USA
11 posted 2000-05-02 12:51 PM


Lone Wolf,
    I like who you are!      This is a very good insight into your personality.  Thank you for sharing it with us!



 Trust Instinct. Instinct will keep an animal alive, but Logic can kill a man.

Richard "Rickey" N. Boydstun, Jr.

TerryW
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since 2000-03-23
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Louisville, Mississippi, USA
12 posted 2000-05-02 12:52 PM


LoneWolf,
    Very, very good!   I like what I see, too!  You are a very special person, and we are glad you are our friend here at Passion's Place!    


 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

X Angel
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13 posted 2000-05-02 01:13 PM


What fun it is to read everyone's renditions of my son's homework. Thanks for such a neat poem! I like it!

~X~

warmhrt
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since 1999-12-18
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14 posted 2000-05-02 01:57 PM


Hi Lone Wolf,

You did a wonderful job with this challenge.
I really like how poems like this let us get to know each other a little better.

Warmhrt

 the poet's pen...gives to airy nothing
A local habitation and a name ~ Shakespeare

Lone Wolf
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Lansing, MI USA
15 posted 2000-05-03 11:42 PM


Sven....nice to meet you too.  Feel like I have known you many years...

TearsFromHeaven.....thank you!!!  I like you too!!  that is what I was going for!!  

Terry W....Thank you, my friend!!!  I love it here at Passions Place.  I like you too!!  Perhaps we can talk sometime...

X Angel....you are welcome!!  Thank you for posting it to begin with!!  Fun to write!!

Warmhrt....thank you, too!!  I like these kind also!!  




 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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