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serenity blaze
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0 posted 04-30-2000 11:55 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

I am Keeper of The Secrets.
I am Singer of The Song.
Ponder stars & love's begin,
as Elders chant my name within.
Desirous, hunger, still unknown,
I keep the secrets,
sing the songs.

I am Goddess, b'neath the moon,
sway to feel the rhythmic tune--
reaching down to touch the dew,
I worry that the stars cry too.
Shedding tears for unknown long...
I am keeper of the secrets.
I am singer of the song.

I am aware that danger lurks.
And yes, 'tis true that fire burns.
Remembering days of laughter free,
prod ember of the dying me--
I pray to find serenity.
Keeper of no secrets sworn
singing song forevermore.


(Michael made me do it.)
© Copyright 2000 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 04-30-2000 11:58 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Well, thank you Michael for having serenity write this poem for us!!  This was indeed wonderful... you have done well with the challenge.. .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

netswan
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2 posted 05-01-2000 12:01 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Shame on you Michael for making serenity
bare her soul.

Lovely Serenity,  Nice to meet you.

netswan
devina
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3 posted 05-01-2000 12:02 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This is perfect sis...I can feel you in every line!! Heck- if I knew it would be this good, I'd have made you do it!!!

Love you
~D


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Alicat
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4 posted 05-01-2000 02:09 AM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

Serenity...wow....you really captured the essence of Nature with this one.  A very very fine answer to the challenge.

Alicat
Janet Marie
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5 posted 05-01-2000 02:46 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

I am Goddess, b'neath the moon,
sway to feel the rhythmic tune--
reaching down to touch the dew,
I worry that the stars cry too.
Shedding tears for unknown long...
I am keeper of the secrets.
I am singer of the song.
----------------

remind me to send M, a thank you note...
"I am" smiling now...
you are the goddess of serene...
this is perfect sweets!!
(dont cha leave me no more)  


 ~as always, Take Care,JM~
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I know it's been a long road
To get these towns behind me and I
Will gladly reap what we may sow--
I am there for you ...
and you're there for me ...
Are you waiting for
Heart in hand
Woman and man
See me where I stand I am
Heart
Heart in hand
~vertical horizon~

bobbycat
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6 posted 05-01-2000 03:00 AM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

Beautiful words, Keeper of the Secrets.     I hear your Song, loud and clear.  Excellent poem. Blessed be.

Bobbycat =^..^=
TearsFromHeaven
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7 posted 05-01-2000 03:28 AM       View Profile for TearsFromHeaven   Email TearsFromHeaven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TearsFromHeaven

serenity,
     I have to thank Michael for making you do it.  It is wonderful.  I like the images you brought to me, strong and powerful, yet compassionate.    Very good!

 Trust Instinct. Instinct will keep an animal alive, but Logic can kill a man.

Richard "Rickey" N. Boydstun, Jr.
serenity blaze
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8 posted 05-01-2000 04:43 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Sven.  M'luv,as always, thank you, your
       kindness means much to me.

n'swan.  Have we not met?  If not, a fine
       how d'ya do to you...and thanx.

devina.  Words beyond hugs...love you much.
       check your mail tomorrow...LTY...

Alicat.  Beware.  I am growing fond of you.
       This was much fun.  thanx to you as
       well as Michael... you guys tag-teamed
       me, methinks...

J-Marie.  Leave you?  NEVER...How could I
       stand meself?  More later...and put
       some salve on those lips, 'k?

T-F-H. I am also a Wiper of Tears...(Don't
       make me come over there...)  Thank you
       for your sweet reply.

bobbycat.  A Merry Meet to you! and a Goddess
        wink back atchya!  Thank you, friend.

And thanks to all...Merry May & Blessed Beltane to you all...Now go and enjoy the day!  I close now, as I have dreams to dream.
Michael
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9 posted 05-01-2000 04:54 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

You are truly one of a kind, serenity and you've done wonderful with this one.  I'm glad I made you do it.  


Michael
Tess
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10 posted 05-01-2000 08:53 AM       View Profile for Tess   Email Tess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tess's Home Page   View IP for Tess

This is beautiful, and I can only echo the comments above. you used the inspiration well to show us your heart and soul.  

 "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time
that you've never had it before."
~author unknown~


passing shadows
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11 posted 05-02-2004 09:19 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

yes, you are
 
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