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The Messengers of God

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Marina
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0 posted 04-30-2000 11:45 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Marina


The Messengers of God

Through silence of dark and murk
In ties that bind  mortal with the immortal
In the gift of love, is the Dove's work
Co-excisting on Earth's Plain that we must share

There names and spirit faces, I know not
Only delighting in the spell of radiant beauty
Many generations, of this great creation have repetitively sought
To seek out these invisible helpers from the City of David

In brightly lit hues, of hearts fire red
They descend from winter white tunnel
Created from ashes and dust, we are awakened from our bed
In a sea of blues and greens, the Arch Angels have come

These heavenly hosts, the Sons of God
Hold the melody of our prayers
Entrust in thee and you will see
That these are the messengers
The messengers of God

Marina Feb 4/2000

© Copyright 2000 Marina Crossley - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 04-30-2000 11:52 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Why, hello, Marina. Long time no see.
I like this one. Great message in it.

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep
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2 posted 05-01-2000 12:00 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

No doubt.. . I'm with Jeffery. . .

This a great one Marina. . .they are indeed all around us. . . who knows?  You may be talking to one right now. ..

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Janet Marie
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In brightly lit hues, of hearts fire red
They descend from winter white tunnel
Created from ashes and dust, we are awakened from our bed
In a sea of blues and greens, the Arch Angels have come
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love the imagery in this...
and the message.
very well written and thought thru work
most impressive marina-girl *smile*
that stanza above is perfection!!

 ~as always, Take Care,JM~
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I know it's been a long road
To get these towns behind me and I
Will gladly reap what we may sow--
I am there for you ...
and you're there for me ...
Are you waiting for
Heart in hand
Woman and man
See me where I stand I am
Heart
Heart in hand
~vertical horizon~

TearsFromHeaven
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4 posted 05-01-2000 03:24 AM       View Profile for TearsFromHeaven   Email TearsFromHeaven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TearsFromHeaven

Marina,
    Very good!  I like the tone and the mood of this one.  Gives us a light of hope.  I loved reading your poem.

 Trust Instinct. Instinct will keep an animal alive, but Logic can kill a man.

Richard "Rickey" N. Boydstun, Jr.
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5 posted 05-01-2000 11:19 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is very lovely, Marina and very well done!

Denise
Marina
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6 posted 05-01-2000 03:51 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

This is the very first poem I had ever written.  I only posted it to show a friend who had never seen it.  I would like to say my skills as a so called "poet" have improved since, however I believe my progress may be a little slow.  I can say however....that I certainly do enjoy writing poetry and I am always grateful for the support and compliments you all have always shown me.
Thank you to everyone for your posts.

Marina


[This message has been edited by Marina (edited 05-01-2000).]
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Being your first poem its charmed, and it was a excellent start. I think it sorta set your style very well. Nice to read it again.

James
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8 posted 05-01-2000 04:11 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I enjoyed the imagery and the spirit of this poem...James
Marina
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9 posted 05-01-2000 08:29 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

James...charmed?  I believe that is word associated with witchcraft isn't it??? But I do thank you for your compliment.

James, thank you as always.  I always look forward to your post.

Marina
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10 posted 05-02-2000 01:24 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Jeffery e-mail me when you get a topic.

Marina
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Messengers of God -we entertain Angels unaware, very good and descriptive poem.


 
Marina
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12 posted 05-08-2000 05:49 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Rosebud, thank you.  I do believe angels are everywhere.

Marina
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