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*Moonkisses* |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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Moonkisses touch in soft regret Upon her blowing hair of gold As tomorrow's dreams of fancy Grow to become bitter cold. Falling like the fading stars Are the dreams of yesteryear The warmth of love once had Now glints within a quiet tear. Upon her silken skin of white Angel wings softly caress Hope glimmers within distant eyes Dancing with gentle finesse. Fragrance lingers, clean and light Sprinkled within the breeze There he stands, framed in gold Now falling to his knees. "Your beauty is forevermore." Are his strongly desperate words He speaks of his ignorance And how his reasons had been absurd. "Will you take me back, my love?" He asks between sliding tears She cannot keep from smiling And saying "Oh, yes my dear." He rushes into waiting arms And two lost souls connect again They learn that the light of love Can cleanse the pain within. *Krista Knutson* "Lonliness is the human condition." *Mark Twain, in the book "The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn"* |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krista~ This is one of the prettiest pieces I've ever read from you. Your muse is whispering magic. 'Falling like the fading stars Are the dreams of yesteryear The warmth of love once had Now glints within a quiet tear.' Just lovely, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Great poem Krista! I liked seeing a happy ending, and the moral at the end. Excellent Abrahm Simons "...Watching fate as it flows down the path we have chose" - Trent Reznor, "We're in this Together" |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Good poem, Krista. Things can indeed turn around if both want it to...nicely done. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
It takes a strong woman to make lost love work...best wishes to you!!! And the poem was simply perfect to my eyes!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all so much!  *Krista Knutson* "Lonliness is the human condition." *Mark Twain, in the book "The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn"* |
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