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cutie2005
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Bennett, Colorado USA


0 posted 04-30-2000 09:23 PM       View Profile for cutie2005   Email cutie2005   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for cutie2005

You know I love you,
and i will forever
I just don't think we'll be together
Everyone knows theres a time to go
and when theres a time to just let go.
You tell me i'm your dream come true
and that your love for me is unexplainable.
No matter whatever happens to you or me
I will always keep you in my dreams.
As I remember all the times we spent on the phone
or times we spent all alone,
times we spent on the beach and times when we giggled and laughed about everything.
Even the times we got in a fight, but forgave eachother and just forgot.
It's time for me to go now,
remember me sometimes,
You will always and forever be with me as I remember our happy memories....


    this is the very first one i ever did... I'm 13 and it was just kind of a thought.. So i worte it down and it came to this.... Thank you all  Love you.
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netswan
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since 03-28-2000
Posts 1395
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1 posted 04-30-2000 09:30 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Hi Cutie -- Good for you to write, as
it spiels out -- that is a great way
to create a poem.

Boy, am I glad I am not the one that
gets this one --------what a heart breaker
for someone.

Well done.  Keep writing  
netswan
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2 posted 04-30-2000 09:36 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

If I haven't welcomed you to passions already let me do it now.
Welcome to passions.

I have found in my experience that when the poems "write themselves" is when we tend to see more of our true feelings and hearts emotions. You have done very well with this piece.

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep
JamesMichael
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3 posted 10-04-2002 05:10 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Like the line..."remember me sometime"...many times I remember my past loves...James
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