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Torrie
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since 2000-04-09
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0 posted 2000-04-30 05:46 PM


You tell me,
Last night you had a dream
and I was in it.

You say the dream was that
I wasn't talking to you...
And you couldn't figure out why.
It saddened your soul
because I was mad at you.

The funny thing is,
The same night I had a dream
and you were in it.

My dream was that I wanted to talk
but you weren't interested...
And I couldn't figure out why.
It saddened my soul
because I was mad at you.

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netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
1 posted 2000-04-30 05:48 PM


How clever and touching, Torrie.

Thanks for sharing this.
I enjoyed reading it.

netswan

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-04-30 06:27 PM


Torrie~
How prophetic dreams can sometimes be.
Enjoyed the read.
~*Marge*~



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