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There are days

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Gemini
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0 posted 04-30-2000 04:00 PM       View Profile for Gemini   Email Gemini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Gemini

Tried to forget you, but to no avail.
Love found you only in a fairy tale.

My heart has decided you'll always be
A part of my dreams and memory.

I'm trying to lead my life and go on
But sometimes sing a lonely heart song.

It would not have been so sad had it not have been so true
But feel I'm going to live the rest of my days lost in loving you.

There are days where I want to see you and hold you so bad I can't breathe.
Then there are days where I feel content in knowing I loved and told you and seek comfort in me.

And yet I know things can never be any other way than the way they are
But, I will always care about you, even if for now it is from afar.
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Janet Marie
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1 posted 04-30-2000 04:07 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

It would not have been so sad had it not have been so true
But feel I'm going to live the rest of my days lost in loving you.

There are days where I want to see you and hold you so bad I can't breathe.
Then there are days where I feel content in knowing I loved and told you and seek comfort in me.
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Gemini...
this is BEAUTIFUL!!
very touching and tender..
I feel your ache an longing in this...
and I relate to it all too well.
loved the line...
>>"hold you so bad I can't breathe."
man do I know what you mean *sigh* (smile)

very well written and expressed piece here.
very.

 ~as always, Take Care,JM~
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I know it's been a long road
To get these towns behind me and I
Will gladly reap what we may sow--
I am there for you ...
and you're there for me ...
Are you waiting for
Heart in hand
Woman and man
See me where I stand I am
Heart
Heart in hand
~vertical horizon~

Michael
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2 posted 04-30-2000 04:10 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Uh, to say this one hit home with me would be a dire understatement.  You have my every sympathy and empathy on these feelings and longings.  Very well done.


Michael
Gemini
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3 posted 05-01-2000 10:10 PM       View Profile for Gemini   Email Gemini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gemini

Thank you Janet Marie, thank you Michael. Your kind words are appreciated.
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I understand this ache
 
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