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AliciaRose
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0 posted 2000-04-30 12:51 PM


Fat Cat

Fat cat! Fat cat!  
You are so fat.

Fat cat you are
Incredibly very fat!!!

So fat I can't believe it!
Did I give you diet food?

I think I did.
I did?

Some milk and some cream?
What else more?

Diet food?

I love you anyway
My fat cat.


-by AliciaRose peri
April 30

© Copyright 2000 AliciaRose - All Rights Reserved
Aimster
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1 posted 2000-04-30 12:59 PM


~Alicia

This was fantastic, and so cute. It made me think of this very fat cat i had a few years ago. his name was duffy and i had him since i was seven years old too. he was big and gray and liked to eat all the time, sort of like Garfield. Thanks for the smile and the great poem!

amy  

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2 posted 2000-04-30 01:05 PM


I have a fat dog that has to eat diet food
but she is still fat. She eats too much and lays around. She needs to go to the park and run. I wish I had a kitten too

Jennifer

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3 posted 2000-04-30 01:11 PM


AliciaRose~
I like your FAT CAT poem.

~*Marge*~



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Poet deVine
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4 posted 2000-04-30 01:57 PM


I have one of these! Her name is Nala. She weighs 20 pounds! Her favorite place to sleep is under the computer desk. Maybe she's waiting for a few words to drop off the computer screen so she can write her own poem!

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us. It's great!!

ESP
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5 posted 2000-04-30 02:10 PM


Lol...this is cute! Reminds me of a cat belonging to one of my friends. His name is Tommykins and he is hugely fat!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
6 posted 2000-04-30 02:24 PM


Alicia, I love your poem, as much as I love you my sweet angel.  
Alicat
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7 posted 2000-04-30 02:37 PM


Hehehehe....now this one made me think of Custard, a 23 pound black calico cat we had for the longest time.  

Thank you for the laughs and memories...you have a gift.


Alicat

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FT Hood,Tx
8 posted 2000-04-30 09:45 PM


alicia - never had a fat cat myself, but I have written a few poems about cats.  maybe I can find them somewhere for you.  Hopefully I'll see you the 8th of May when I'm up in DC.  I want to see just how much you've grown since the last time I saw you.  See you then hun.
Nan
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9 posted 2000-05-01 07:43 PM


Fat Cat, Fat Cat...
Sleeps on the mat
Sleeps all the day
Sleeps night away
Fat Cat, Fat Cat
Needs to go on a diet...

Hehe... I like your poem, Alicia..



Marina
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Pickering, Ontario
10 posted 2000-05-01 09:33 PM


Alicia, honey you are going to make a very famous poet one day. You just keep on writing and posting your poems here so we can all enjoy them.

Your friend,
Marina

Dawn Eclipse
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11 posted 2000-05-01 10:25 PM


Hehehehehe.... I haven't got a fat cat.  Pretty small one actually, but I do have a fat puppy!  He is bigger than me!  Great poem!

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

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A.C.Turner
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Reading, Pa.Home of Bardfest
12 posted 2000-05-01 10:34 PM


My best friend's Mom's cat weighs 30lbs. First time I'd ever seen a fat cat. I wonder how fat a cat can get? Great fun poem. ACT.
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