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Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp

0 posted 2000-04-30 11:56 AM


I have seen beauty at it’s best
with you rocking to old an melody
Wrapping your arms around my neck
your flight took refuge, with me.

You landed upon my brow
you did brush this lovers heart.
With binding words of forever
you stayed, you kissed, and depart.

Searching deep within your eyes
trying to read your soul.
I found no despise
but a depth of love untold.

As the music plays on
we touch hands to free our souls.
Laughing our spirits away
but soon the bell tolls.

I’ve seen the love you possess
more so than most.
Giving your love to me
it’s to bad your a ghost.

Joel.


 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

© Copyright 2000 Joel. - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-04-30 01:01 PM


Oh, wow. You got me with that last line! I like this one!  
Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
2 posted 2000-04-30 01:22 PM


Hi Joel the wolf,

Some times we entertain ghost and even enjoy thier company, but some day we will entertain true love and not have to say to bad or goodbye, wonderful writing here Joel.

Cerenity

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2002-10-04 05:08 AM


Enjoyed...Yes too bad...James
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