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One goal one soul
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One goal one soul |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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One goal one soul The wind that touched your face today And mine in gentle feel and play, Embraced us since our very birth, Forever with us on this earth. Our breath has touched and joined with those. In past and present since time arose. And you and I have touched before And will embrace forever more. So do not ever feel left out And do not ever harbor doubt, That you and I are tied as one And never will we be undone. We all encircle time and space, We live and die within this place. We are together in one goal, We are together as one soul. The breeze that kissed you on the face, Has held me in the same embrace. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful and touching, Sy! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Sy, this is awesome in concept and poetic prowess. Very moving piece. Indubitably impressed I am. Michael |
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Brandyn Sand Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 82Columbia, SC |
I don't know what it is about the wind. Perhaps it is the one thing we all "feel" no matter where on this planet we happen to be. It does connect us all in a sense. And you've captured that thought so remarkably in these words. An enjoyable piece. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ The spirit of the wind surely blows within your soul buffeting your words about finding my heart's goal Believer that I am in breezes soft caress this is the very poem of yours that I like best Encircling winds that offer to me the chance to rest upon cheek of thee *This ~spirit of the wind~ REALLY enjoyed this one, my friend. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Thank you, *L* Michael, thank you for the awesome. Brandyn, Thank you for the wonderful comment. Marge, A wonderful response, thank you so much. *L* |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
I really enjoyed this one, Sy! Spirits united and in sync. Lovely! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is beautiful! A lovely way to describe love......  |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely poem here, Seymour! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Your words have lifted my sprirt. Nicely done. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Our breath has touched and joined with those. In past and present since time arose. And you and I have touched before And will embrace forever more. So do not ever feel left out And do not ever harbor doubt, That you and I are tied as one And never will we be undone. -------------- The breeze that kissed you on the face, Has held me in the same embrace. -------------- OH MAN!!! *SIGH* this is PERFECT!!! by far my fav of yours... the rhyme and gentle flow is perfect... and the emotions are superb. have I mentioned before... THAT I LOVE WHEN YOU WRITE LIKE THIS!!(SMILE) EXQUISITE poem SY. ~as always, Take Care,JM~ -------------- I know it's been a long road To get these towns behind me and I Will gladly reap what we may sow-- I am there for you ... and you're there for me ... Are you waiting for Heart in hand Woman and man See me where I stand I am Heart Heart in hand ~vertical horizon~ |
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Franni Junior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 39 |
A perfect poem for a lasting love. My parents were married for 62 years. This should be on a golden anniversay card. Beautifully done. I enjoyed reading it. Franni |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is the best poem I have ever read on love of fellow man. It is wonderful and beautiful. Should be a mandatory read for our foreign diplomatic corps, and for every high school student, and for...... Exquisite, Sy Love you Liz |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Perhaps I misinterpreted this poem, but read it again with my interpretation. It is wonderful! Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Doreen, Yes and thank you. Poet deVine, Yes and a little more then love. ESP, Thank you for the hugs, I send them back with interest. Gemini, Yours and everyone elses. Janet, And the wind embraces you too. *L* Franni, I have four more to go, I'm only at 58. *L* Elizabeth, I wrote it with both interpretations. It can be read singular or plural. Thank you and Love Sy |
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