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Area Fifty-One ('Stute)

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Justin Nuendo
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Ozzz


0 posted 04-30-2000 08:30 AM       View Profile for Justin Nuendo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justin Nuendo's Home Page   View IP for Justin Nuendo

Okay Willy, it seems it’s up to you and me
What a mess they got theirselves into !
*Throwing unconsious Crayon King over my shoulder*
Holy Moose, King ! All this booze will kill you !
Not to mention my back ! Is that lead in your shoes ?

Willy, you help Lady in Red
Be careful, she’s a bit fuddled
With all those Shirley’s that no wonder
And no doubt she’s also a bit muddled
No, no Willy, this ain’t no time for a cuddle !

Crachet, please let me help you
You look a bit pale, not getting sick  my dear ?
I know you’re still in shock from Vegas
Too much muscles at the same time I fear
Come on Nursy, into that bus, be a dear.

Get over here, I need yar help
Moose won’t let go of this decanter
He seems to think it’s a decoder or so
Trying to decode the blinks of the Jinn/panter
Shhh, just let him be for now, no banter !

Yoo ONE FLEW OVER get of that bus
Ya know ya can’t really fly
Holy Moose what booze does to ya
One of these days you surely die
And yar tombstone’d say "he flew too high"

Hey Fudd, ya potato head
Getting on this bus or not ?
Or do ya really like to run
Behind this Silly-bus like a sot ?
If ya have to, go and plod !

Now Cat/Jinn, Jinn/Cat, whatever ya are
Like the clappers on that bus
I got a gut feeling you are
The key to the Silly-bus
And the magical syllable

Honker did ya see Tinkerbell ?
She was here just a minute ago
Trying to show me she could still fly
In a straight line, made quite a show
Ah ! There she is ! Asleep she’s pretty ya know

Now Willy I hope ya can drive
Cuz that’s something I never done
And steer this monster Silly-bus
To boldly go where none have gone
Off we Are into Area Fifty-One !

AND NO MORE BOOZE YA HEAR !!


© Copyright 2000 Justin Nuendo - All Rights Reserved
Daysleeper
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since 04-23-2000
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2 posted 04-30-2000 08:16 PM       View Profile for Daysleeper   Email Daysleeper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Daysleeper

ROTFL. This poem really brought a cynical smile (my favorite kind of smile, by the way) to my face. I've never seen a sort of interactive monolauge written so well, and so amusingly. The different levels that this poem can be interpreted at make it all the more interesting... bravo... bravo...  

...Daysleeper...


"I swear they're out there... I swear they're out there..."

"They are watching us... they are watching us... they are watching us... from a distance."

Couldn't resist throwing in some of my alien passion.


 "Presently I've had enough of all your sanity." -James Kavanaugh



[This message has been edited by Daysleeper (edited 04-30-2000).]
Cheshire Grin
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since 03-06-2000
Posts 14
'Stute


3 posted 04-30-2000 09:07 PM       View Profile for Cheshire Grin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cheshire Grin

And on Lady's lap
A fat cat sat
Purring and kneading
Though she was standing

She stood in the que
As I did mew
Seeing much fun
At Area 51

Though noone had the guts
To drive the Silly-bus
As I vanished with a grin
With feline thoughts again

'Where's the litter box?
What if I get the pox?
Where's my food?
Can I be rude?'

Well, of course I can
Being a feline man
Persnikitty and then
I am the Cheshire Grin





 The cat grins.
Slowly the grin vanishes
Until only the cat remains.
DOH!

Willy Honker
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4 posted 04-30-2000 10:03 PM       View Profile for Willy Honker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Willy Honker

Now Justin
what we're ya thinking
I couldn't have cuddled
that there lady
if my life
had depended on it.
See, she was like dead
I reckoned,
she was just floppy
as can be.
I picked up
that there arm
of hers and boom
it clocked me in my head.
I thunk she's more than
just passed out Justin
thunk we needed
assistance over there.
The Nurse Crachet
was still riding here
so I asked her kindly
if she could come on over
and check on this lady
not sure if she was with us
or if she'd checked out.
So next time Justin
please don't jump my bones
over accusations that you
can't swallow with water.

[This message has been edited by Willy Honker (edited 04-30-2000).]
netswan
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since 03-28-2000
Posts 1395
Washington


5 posted 04-30-2000 11:30 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

LOL  this one is a bit wild for me,
but no more amazing then area 52  
haha

netswan
KEEP writing.
Cheshire Grin
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Posts 14
'Stute


6 posted 05-02-2000 07:08 PM       View Profile for Cheshire Grin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cheshire Grin

Netswan, have no worries
Else we'll get the gurnies
And wheel you right in the 'Stute
It'll be fun, yes, absolute
Just grab a patient's name
And join our silly game






 The cat grins.
Slowly the grin vanishes
Until only the cat remains.
DOH!

Jeannie
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since 03-17-2000
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Wherever I'm needed


7 posted 05-03-2000 12:08 PM       View Profile for Jeannie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeannie

Well, now I'm a bit smitten
I see over here a male kitten
he's mighty big maybe a cat
think I'll go over give a swat.
Too cute think I'll just cuddle
think you've been in a puddle
smells like a swamp your fur
yet I do love your perfect purr.

  


Cheshire Grin
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Posts 14
'Stute


8 posted 05-03-2000 06:00 PM       View Profile for Cheshire Grin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cheshire Grin

I shan't tell any lies
Rodents of Unusual Size
Were what I was stalking
While the rest were talking
But they ran off in a fog
I followed to a bog
Sank in a mound of peat
That greened up my feet
But to clear this afliction
Just shower with affection






 The cat grins.
Slowly the grin vanishes
Until only the cat remains.
DOH!

Jeannie
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9 posted 05-03-2000 06:14 PM       View Profile for Jeannie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeannie

Affection for Cheshire Feline
infection at it's finest degree.
Affliction ridden poor kitty cat
detection device shows calm.
Reflection glowing contentment
protection of Jinn/Cat's thankful.
Recollection knows Cheshire
election to cuddle up in warmth.

  


Cheshire Grin
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since 03-06-2000
Posts 14
'Stute


10 posted 05-03-2000 06:27 PM       View Profile for Cheshire Grin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cheshire Grin

Oh dreamy Genie Jeanie
Purring like a Harley engie
Kneeding for all I'm worth
Paws moving back and forth
Oops..I gave to much lovin
See, I've shredded the cushion
On this zany 'Stutie bus
Hmm..hope noone makes a fuss....


GRREEEOOOAAAWWLLLL...
PUUUURRRRARRRRRARRRRRRRR







 The cat grins.
Slowly the grin vanishes
Until only the cat remains.
DOH!

ONE FLEW OVER
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Posts 60
Cuckoos Nest


11 posted 05-03-2000 07:10 PM       View Profile for ONE FLEW OVER   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ONE FLEW OVER

All right
these cats
are getting
to me
I can't take
their affection
any longer
One's crying
and purring
everywhere,
the other one's
growling
destructively.
Then the black cat
succumbs
to cuddling
against
disappearing cat
who now
is in kitty heaven.
Where
did they
come from
and why
can't we boot
them out
of here?  
Cheshire Grin
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since 03-06-2000
Posts 14
'Stute


12 posted 05-03-2000 08:05 PM       View Profile for Cheshire Grin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cheshire Grin

One Flew Over
the cuckoo's nest
but it's not there
*burp* had to digest
that silly bird
tried to fly
and in the sun's eye
he fried
hmmmm...Blackened Chicken
Cajun Style
and ah'm only in heaven
when filled with divinity
or devinity...hmm..won't go there
so, try to catch this elusive grin
if'n you dare to even begin
or shall you over another coop
be again One Flew Over...got the scoop?




 The cat grins.
Slowly the grin vanishes
Until only the cat remains.
DOH!

Dr.Moose1
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since 09-05-99
Posts 3505
Bewilderment , USA


13 posted 05-04-2000 04:46 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

This is "Cat" astrophic
I should have come back sooner
Watch out Jinn , the Cheshire Grin
is lookin for a " nooner " !

That cat has wiles behind his smile
an agenda he's not shown
He tried to chew on ol' One Flew
and would've had she not flown

He's a shabby tabby
though the right words he may purr
He shouldn't be quite so gabby
or more will fly than fur

These rumors that he's spreading
may not cause his own be-heading
But the Vet trip he's been dreading
may just happen yet

If he truly does desire
to sing with a boys choir
All his notes will be much higher
I'm willing to bet !



[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 05-04-2000).]
GOETHE
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Posts 9
Weimar, GDR


14 posted 05-04-2000 08:28 PM       View Profile for GOETHE   Email GOETHE   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GOETHE

hmmmm glad to know that I am not a part of this foolishness.  personally I think that those of society who have to think of little green men running around and spacecraft and anal probings are just a bit unsecure in their sexual orientation.  for more on my discertation, please visit your local psychiatrist.  or call me at 1-800-in-stute.  Thank you.  and have a nice day.   )


 "It is quite beyond me how anyone can believe God speaks to us in books and stories. If the world does not directly reveal to us our relationship to it, if our hearts fail to tell us what we owe ourselves and others, we shall assuredly not learn it from books, which are at best designed but to give names to our errors."
Willy Honker
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since 04-18-2000
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15 posted 05-05-2000 08:55 PM       View Profile for Willy Honker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Willy Honker

What's all the commotion
about here on this bus
how's a man supposed to
drive with such ruckus?
Someone needs to contain
these two crazy cats
I'm thinking that there Jinn
is in heat oh my, drats
we ain't gonna get no sleep
with that wine to come
it will pierce our ears even
be totally foul to some.
Can't we just ship her off
to the great wilderness
actually send them both off
so we'll have calmness.
I know some of you here are
attached to her charm
yet I bet she's only been
around here twisting arms.
She never took to me and I
don't like cat's like that
almost like she's human acting
like a little spoiled brat.
Dr.Moose1
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since 09-05-99
Posts 3505
Bewilderment , USA


16 posted 05-10-2000 04:23 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

There's something in the water here
an unknown element
That stifles creativity
and colors our intent

Insidious it works it's way
into the story's thread
Surely you have felt it too
and it's not just in my head

I suggest we leave this place
and venture here no more
I'm not too sure I want to see
what's behind those other doors

I'm outta here somethings not right
at least that's what I think
The "Stute's" never too far away
don't you know ( nudge nudge wink wink )
Willy Honker
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17 posted 05-10-2000 05:46 PM       View Profile for Willy Honker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Willy Honker

Hey Doc, I'm on your wave
I say we blow this place
catch a drinking hole
along our way to wherever.
I'm mighty thirsty for a brew
after rescuing you all
now things are settling down
I think a nice pub in town
would do us all fine.
I don't know about these cats
still think they need a home
down under the earth.
What's with this here vase
you all use it for daisy's
it's might pretty
must be the Lady's?
Watch that cornering Justin
darn near threw me to the floor
and the pretty vase
is in pieces.
What's this book here under it all
say's "Manuscript of Spells
and Their Reversals,"
now how did this fit in that there vase?

Jeannie
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since 03-17-2000
Posts 40
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18 posted 05-11-2000 06:26 PM       View Profile for Jeannie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeannie

Everyone,
everyone
look at me
I'm standing
on two feet
yes it's true
it's Jeannie.
I shed the cat
so to say
must be
my broken vase
where is
that dirty rat?





brian madden
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19 posted 05-11-2000 06:52 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

I'll drink to that.... yes things sure look different with alcohol vision. Though I haven't seen any UFOS yet, just a well cos bright lights are killers especially with a hangover. thanks for the laugh.
lucky
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20 posted 05-11-2000 09:18 PM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

Aa huu, Aa huu huu, he can call me flower if he wants ta...
lucky
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21 posted 05-11-2000 09:50 PM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

JUSTIN BLACK

One pill makes you larger
And one pill makes you small
And the ones that mother gives you
Don't do anything at all
Go ask Justin Nuendo
When she's ten feet tall
And if you go chasing rabbits
And you know you're going to fall
Tell 'em a hookah smoking caterpillar
Has given you the call
Call Justin Nuendo
When she was just small
When the men on the chessboard
Get up and tell you where to go
And you've just had some kind of mushroom
And your mind is moving low
Go ask Justin Nuendo
I think she'll know
When logic and proportion
Have fallen sloppy dead
And the White Knight is talking backwards
And the Red Queen's "off with yer head!"
Remember what the dormouse says
"Feed your head."
Dr.Moose1
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22 posted 05-14-2000 01:01 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Soft foot-steps echo off closed doors
Deja' view ! this way third floor !
Take the steps two at a time
Much easier than walls to climb
Been here once or thrice it seems
Though those may be another's dreams
Hard to say been gone a spell
A few did even think me well

Smell that antiseptic air
The aroma of the "stute"
The "Artiste Extrordinaire"
Once said it made him mute
Or maybe that was Vinny
It's really not that clear
It seems like I've been gone too long
What's that noise I hear ?
Tip-toe 'round the corner
Like Fred Flintstone when he's bowling
and right smack dab in front of me
I see ...
 
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