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You Walk , I'll Run

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Cerenity
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since 02-16-2000
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Escondido-California


0 posted 04-30-2000 07:17 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Cerenity


You Walk , Iíll Run


How do you not know me?
I am who stands in front of you

Your eyes see with no depth
I see clearly of you

Our vows were to be in union
You walk alone

I am the one you pledged your
soul safe keeping

You were to treasure the heart
that beatís for you endlessly

Melodiously was our tune to be
but soured you have made its note  

What is your aim?
Mine was to reach loverís tabernacle

You appear to be seeking flight
I ask why?

You continuously deny your position
I am left in wait

Your love I declare false
You canít fight the truth

You want to walk
Well I want to run


By,  Cerenity    


  


© Copyright 2000 Ellen Ware - All Rights Reserved
netswan
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since 03-28-2000
Posts 1395
Washington


1 posted 04-30-2000 07:21 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Cerenity this had quite a surprise
ending ----sad thing to write about,
but how well you did it!  

Thanks for sharing
netswan
Joel the wolf
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2 posted 04-30-2000 11:09 AM       View Profile for Joel the wolf   Email Joel the wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Joel the wolf's Home Page   View IP for Joel the wolf

Cerenity-1, You are the first poem for me to venture out of dark passions, I was hoping to see the world with some light.
I have waited like this, your poem is very heartfelt and to the bone.
If this is from experience my heart to you,
It this is from thoughts my heart to you again for that. And do run.

Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.
Cerenity
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3 posted 04-30-2000 02:25 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Netswan,
Thank you so much for your reply.

Hi Joel the wolf,
This carry's light for I can see clearly what is in front of me, to experience it I don't recommend, but I will take flight at just the right moment in time, for now there must be a lesson in all of this somewere. Thank you for your kind words.

Cerenity
ESP
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since 01-25-2000
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Floating gently on a cloud....


4 posted 04-30-2000 02:38 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Hi Cerenity!

I hope you take flight before your wings get clipped! This is a lovely poem...very sad.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
TearsFromHeaven
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Louisville, Mississippi, USA


5 posted 05-01-2000 03:48 AM       View Profile for TearsFromHeaven   Email TearsFromHeaven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TearsFromHeaven

Cerenity,
     Wow!  I can empathize with you.  I know how it feels to be in this position.  You guys are all so incredible.  My friend TerryW told me that you were good, and I believe every word he said.  I love it!

 Trust Instinct. Instinct will keep an animal alive, but Logic can kill a man.

Richard "Rickey" N. Boydstun, Jr.
Cerenity
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6 posted 05-01-2000 08:58 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Lizzie,

Thanks for your words of encouragement.

Hi TearsFromHeaven,

Thank you so much for your kind reply, yes passions is full of wonderful poets with very big hearts to match there talents, You will enjoy it here. WELCOME

Love,  Cerenity
Tess
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since 03-22-2000
Posts 291
Australia


7 posted 05-01-2000 09:10 AM       View Profile for Tess   Email Tess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tess's Home Page   View IP for Tess

Bitter sweet sadness here....It's  sad when you realize that you want different things, and I think you expressed it perfectly with you walk, I'll run

 "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time
that you've never had it before."
~author unknown~


DiObear
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since 04-30-2000
Posts 68
Switzerland


8 posted 05-01-2000 09:21 AM       View Profile for DiObear   Email DiObear   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DiObear

Cerenity,

I was married for ten years and my husband always threatened to 'walk'.  I told him that when I was ready I would 'run' and that's what I did ten years ago.  

Good luck to you.


 
passing shadows
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powerful write
 
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