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LenMcC1
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0 posted 2000-04-30 02:43 AM


Devote

Devote
Devoting my life
To an endless smile
Seek
Seeking a way
To smile and disobey

Feel
Feel the wind
As it brushes skin
Smell
Smell the sin
As we all grin

Come to our side and be my friend
Your passion will get you in
If you die on the way
You will only cement your legacy

Hear
Hear a Heart
That beats for you
Love
Love a man
Who does not understand

Grieve
Grieve for me
If you ever leave
Believe
Believe in us
Though I’m not much

Take me with if you say no
What could hurt if I don’t know
To die alone would be your loss
I am always with you every river we cross



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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-04-30 12:19 PM


This is good.  I especially like the last verse.  
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