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I Am (Challenge)

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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 04-30-2000 02:32 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

I Am (Challenge)

I am a destined dreamer and passionate child at heart
I wonder if one fine day all the world could unite as one
I hear echoing harpsichords serenading all of the earth
I see all poor people fed and clothed, living joyful lives
I want peace and tranquility reigning amid all nations
I am a destined dreamer and passionate child at heart

I pretend I'm someone special who has meaning in life
I feel the gentle wings of angels lift me when I'm sad
I touch the stars while reaching for heavenly harmony
I worry that I am only half the person I should really be
I cry because of my helplessness to cure any situation
I am a destined dreamer and passionate child at heart

I understand man was created equal than things changed
I say everything happens for a reason not always visible
I dream of living upon the ocean drenched in tranquility
I try to caress love upon all I meet with words of kindness
I hope one day I can make a difference in many people's lives
I am a destined dreamer and passionate child at heart
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netswan
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1 posted 04-30-2000 02:42 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Hi There Lost Dreamer.  This Challenge
is so cool.  Nice to meet you.
Wonderful Poem -----May your dreams
come true.

netswan
Poet deVine
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2 posted 04-30-2000 02:55 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Gloria! this is great..you really went into the depths of your soul here...I'm also glad to 'know' you better....(I'm having a hard time writing mine)..
Alicat
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3 posted 04-30-2000 03:03 AM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

Gloria, this is simply beautiful...and there is no reason to pretend...you are someone special, and I'm very happy to know you better.


Alicat
doreen peri
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4 posted 04-30-2000 08:10 AM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

This is awesome, Gloria! Now I know why you sat in front of the computer until the sun came up... hehe...

Seriously, you did some soul searching and came up with a very creative piece.

Pretty cool challenge, huh?
Marilyn
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5 posted 04-30-2000 09:01 AM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Hi Gloria. You don't have to worry about making a difference in others lives. You have made a difference in mine and I know in others that know you here. Great job with this.  

It is a very kewl challenge. I am glad Ali brought this back.
Brandyn Sand
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6 posted 04-30-2000 10:48 AM       View Profile for Brandyn Sand   Email Brandyn Sand   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Brandyn Sand's Home Page   View IP for Brandyn Sand

Absolutely beautiful!  *applause*

 
Aimster
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7 posted 04-30-2000 01:21 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~thank you for sharing a view of your soul, and what a beautiful view it is. This is a very awesome challenge, I must say! I am glad to get to know you better.

take care,
amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
ESP
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8 posted 04-30-2000 02:19 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

L.D., how beautiful to be shown some of your lovely soul. This is a lovely poem and you are a lovely, special person...believe that!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
kaile
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9 posted 07-05-2000 03:53 AM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

well, your poetry have certainly made a difference in my life

you have some very noble thought-provoking wishes here...keep dreaming...i do hope your dreams come true
 
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