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I AM" (Challenge)

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Cerenity
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0 posted 04-30-2000 01:37 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Cerenity


“I AM”


I am humbly searching for my heart
and souls contentment.

I wonder if I will ever be able to make
some kind of difference in the world.

I hear my soul groping for loves
return to me.

I see Mother Nature delighting in her
ability to open the hearts of mankind.

I want to know I gave of myself hole
heartedly to all I could before I die.

I am humbly searching for my heart
and souls contentment.


I pretend to breathe a sigh of relief because
the world is in a state of complete peace.

I feel life is passing me by and I will
never really experience true love.

I touch a delicate rose and see the love God
has for all of mankind.

I worry that mankind will destroy the
earth before he learns humility.

I cry for all of the souls that didn’t experienced
true happiness before there passing.

I am humbly searching for my heart
and souls contentment.


I understand what it is to be lonely and
afraid.

I say all of mankind should walk in the steps
of his enemy.

I dream of a world that knows what true
contentment and joy means.

I try to help all of those that cross my path
with what ever means I have available.

I hope that all of the things mentioned in

this poem would come true.

I am humbly searching for my heart
and souls contentment.


By,  Cerenity






[This message has been edited by Cerenity-1 (edited 04-30-2000).]
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netswan
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1 posted 04-30-2000 01:49 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Hi There Cerenity-1  Great Poem.
It is nice to get to know you.
I hope you find all you want out of
life and more.

netswan
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2 posted 04-30-2000 01:57 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This should be all our goals..you've done a great job here...it's nice to finally get to know more about you..  
Alicat
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3 posted 04-30-2000 02:09 AM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

AMEN!

And I do hope you find that for whom you seek.

Very good reply to the challenge, and I'm glad I got to know a bit more about you.


Alicat
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4 posted 04-30-2000 12:16 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Bump!  
Sven
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5 posted 04-30-2000 01:45 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Thanks deVine!!    

Cerenity,  I've always felt that you were someone who was open to many things... and I can see that in this poem. . .

Wonderful. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



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Michael
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6 posted 04-30-2000 01:52 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Wow... I am pleased to make your aquaintence, Cerenity.  This is humbling.  Wow.


michael
Cerenity
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7 posted 04-30-2000 02:15 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi everyone,

netswan,
Thank you so much, and I hope so too.

Poet deVine,
Goals in my life are what keep me alive.
Thank you for your reply.

Alicat,
This was a great idea to bring back, I hope everybody joins in. Thank you I hope to find true love some day.

Poet deVine, oooOOHH  GOOOODIE.....

Sven,
Thank you Sven that was so nice of you to say I try my hardest to be open and honest.

Michael,
The wow is to you my friend for you have blessed many of trying time with your poems for me and I cannot thank you enough.


Thank you so much, Love  Cerenity
ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


8 posted 04-30-2000 02:44 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Dear Cerenity,

I do hope you find what you are looking for in life. Thank you for this look into your soul, it is very beatiful.(Your soul and your poem both).

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
Janet Marie
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9 posted 04-30-2000 03:07 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

I knew you would write a beautiful and thoughtful poem to this challenge.
This is perfect and sincere.
very nice work


 ~as always, Take Care,JM~
--------------
I know it's been a long road
To get these towns behind me and I
Will gladly reap what we may sow--
I am there for you ...
and you're there for me ...
Are you waiting for
Heart in hand
Woman and man
See me where I stand I am
Heart
Heart in hand
~vertical horizon~

Cerenity
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10 posted 04-30-2000 05:29 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Lizzie,

Thank you so much for your kind words.

Hi Janet,

What a nice thing to say thank you so much.

Love  Cerenity
kaile
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11 posted 07-05-2000 03:28 AM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

Cerenity-1..can relate to this piece...for dont we all seek to find true contentment in life...dont we all always yearn to make the world a better place..

i for one wish for all the things in your poem to come true
 
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