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~ViXeN~
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since 2000-01-09
Posts 93
Guelph, Ont. Canada

0 posted 2000-04-30 12:40 PM


Awoke to find myself misplaced
unhappy where I stood
frustrated with those I had faced
and never understood

Awoke to find myself outside
the circle tightly sealed
defiant to all that I tried
and all the pain unhealed

Awoke to find myself alone
just as the days before
where once was heart, now is stone
I’m frozen to the core

Awoke to find myself asleep
dreaming of better days
struggling with the hope I keep
to justify my ways


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netswan
Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
1 posted 2000-04-30 12:47 PM


Vixen -- This is great -- Loved it.

Change what we can
Accept what we cannot
and learn to know the difference

netswan

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
2 posted 2000-04-30 03:33 PM


Hi Vixen,

This was full of self examination, very well done enjoyed the read.

Cerenity

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