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0 posted 2000-04-29 11:42 PM


I am a LoveBug, and the only one
I wonder if I’ll ever be loved, or have any fun
I hear the wheezing of a mime
I see moving flowers, keeping time
I want to find my one true love
I am a LoveBug, and the only one

I pretend I’m a character in my books
I feel his passion, and disapproving looks
I touch his face, and he touches mine
I worry again that love is blind
I cry about reality, when I am alone
I am a LoveBug, and the only one

I understand that looks will fade
I say that all things are what God made
I dream about finding him, I do
I try not to expect that this dream will come true
I hope I will find him, who’s second to none
I am a LoveBug, and the only one



 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

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netswan
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1 posted 2000-04-29 11:44 PM


Ah this is darling Love Bug,
I hope you find him, too.

netswan

Alicat
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2 posted 2000-04-29 11:52 PM


Ego Sum Solum Unum
I, I am the only one





Splendid job in answering the challenge, and I do hope you find him as well.


Alicat

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3 posted 2000-04-30 12:40 PM


You are the bug of love....find happiness.... it may not be a man you need.. find yourself first, my dear...the rest will follow...
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4 posted 2000-04-30 12:08 PM


netswan- Thank you for the nice reply

Alicat- Thanks!  

PDV-Thanks for replying.. you really gave me something to think about

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

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5 posted 2000-04-30 01:49 PM


LoveBug,
        this gave me a whole new look into who you are. . . very well done. . .

And I have to agree with deVine. . . you can't really love others, until you love yourself first. . . hope that you find all the joy that life gives you. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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6 posted 2000-04-30 01:53 PM


Lovebug

you truly are the bug of love. i agree with devine and sven..find yourself first and love that person...and the rest will fall into place. You'll see! Take care!

Amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

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7 posted 2000-05-05 06:22 AM


I just heard you were a virus and sweeping the nation. I guess I'm going to have to keep my eyes open for bugs.

 If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley)

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8 posted 2000-07-05 02:51 AM


beautifully expressed...i wish you success in your quest for true love
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