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Marge Tindal
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Unclipped Wings
~*Marge Tindal*~

An angel gets her wings
from the man she'll love till she dies.
He not only helps her put them on,
he shows her how to fly.

Spread your wings, little angel.
Fly higher than the stars.
I'll be right here waiting,
watching from afar.

Wings unfurled.
Angel flying high.
Fly, little angel,
return to me
by and by.

An angel gets her wings,
from the man who's really smart.
Fly, little angel,
fly straight to this heart.


For my friend, Brian who says
"Every Woman is a beautiful angel in her own way,
just most men are fools and don't see their wings,
or they try to clip them so they can't fly anymore."






 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
kitkat
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1 posted 04-29-2000 09:32 PM       View Profile for kitkat   Email kitkat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kitkat

Your friend is very wise.Let him know iat least I think so.  
doreen peri
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2 posted 04-29-2000 10:19 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

The poem is lovely, Marge. I enjoyed it very much... you always have such a wonderful way of viewing things and relaying them in your verse.

Oh, and btw, ask Brian to email me... LOL... j/k
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3 posted 04-29-2000 10:34 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

oh, Marge, this is great, I love it!!

 Kathleen
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4 posted 04-30-2000 12:36 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

This is fabulous Marge....Really great....Love it.

 A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her.


Michael
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5 posted 04-30-2000 04:06 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

This is wonderful Marge...  send me an angel would ya?   won't be clipping any wings, i promise.  


Michael
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KitKat~
Brian smiles.  

Doreen~
Thank you, hon.
Brian smiles.  

Kathleen~
It is oh, so true.
Takes a real man to realize
the importance of unfurling the angel's wings.

David~
Sweetheart ... you make my day !
Marge smiles.  

Michael~
Thanks ... glad you enjoyed.
Angels all around you ...  
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ESP
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7 posted 04-30-2000 09:14 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Tell Brian I think he is very wise!!
Tell Marge I think her poetry is wonderful!
I truly love this one!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
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8 posted 04-30-2000 09:18 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Marge,
A lovely poem. You know I put some on a wonderful women and I'm still waiting for her to come back. LOL *L*
Marge Tindal
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ESP~
Brian grins like the cheshire cat.  
Marge says thank you.

Seymour~
You are just a rascal ...
if you noticed ...
it said 'the man that's really smart'...
now where do you suppose that leaves you ?
LOL !  Marge grins ..  
Thanks for the chuckle.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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What a wonderful way to look at love.  This poem is up there at the top of my 'favorite poems I've read'.  Thanks.

 
Marge Tindal
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Di0bear~
Thank you so very much for the glow of your words.  I am deeply appreciative.
~*Marge*~


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Marge,
This is another masterful read from you. Your friend is very wise.

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep
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Marge,  my girl, you earn your wings every day  
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Jeffrey~
Thank you ... and yes he is wise.
I appreciate you.

Balladeer~
Sweetheart, you sure know how to place
a smile on my face.
I just love you to pieces.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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This is delicate and lovely Marge...and with your help I'm sure to find me one of those angel soon!!

Karma anyone??? he he I loved this Marge...and your friend is pretty smart too!!!

Love You
~D


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Devina~
You little cutie !
KARMA, indeed !
It will come ... it will come !

Thanks for the 'delicate and dainty'
is that sort of like prissy ? LOL !
That's me !

I love that sense of humor of yours.
You all would love this man ...
he is a truly dear friend.  
I will share all of the latest replies
with him tomorrow.  
He has enjoyed them so far.
Love ya', gal !     K A R M A !  
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge Tindal
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Devina~
You little cutie !
KARMA, indeed !
It will come ... it will come !

Thanks for the 'delicate and dainty'
is that sort of like prissy ? LOL !
That's me !

I love that sense of humor of yours.
You all would love this man ...
he is a truly dear friend.  
I will share all of the latest replies
with him tomorrow.  
He has enjoyed them so far.
Love ya' gal !  
K A R M A !  
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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Lovely stuff Marge(y)...

Wings unfurled.
Angel flying high.
Fly, little angel,
return to me
by and by.

This is very sweet...

love ya
K

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Kamla~
Hi, sweetie.
So good to see your smiling face.
Thanks for the read, hon.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Very wise man, your friend, Brian! Lovely poem, Marge!

Denise
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this is beautiful marge...funny, I have a friend, also named brian...who sees women like that too....must be something in the name  
nice to know there are still some nice guys out there though huh?
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Denise~
So pleased that you enjoyed it, my friend.
Brian is still grinning.

Corazon~
Yeah ... lots of them actually.
They are getting wiser !
~*Marge*~




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^j^ Marge ^j^ such a wonderful verse....and such a wonderful friend.^j^
^j^enjoyed very much ^j^

 Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!


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Thank you for gifting us with this Heavenly bit of writing, Marge...The angels' wings are fluttering so softly tonight...

~ Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau
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