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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Unclipped Wings ~*Marge Tindal*~ An angel gets her wings from the man she'll love till she dies. He not only helps her put them on, he shows her how to fly. Spread your wings, little angel. Fly higher than the stars. I'll be right here waiting, watching from afar. Wings unfurled. Angel flying high. Fly, little angel, return to me by and by. An angel gets her wings, from the man who's really smart. Fly, little angel, fly straight to this heart. For my friend, Brian who says "Every Woman is a beautiful angel in her own way, just most men are fools and don't see their wings, or they try to clip them so they can't fly anymore." ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Your friend is very wise.Let him know iat least I think so.  |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
The poem is lovely, Marge. I enjoyed it very much... you always have such a wonderful way of viewing things and relaying them in your verse. Oh, and btw, ask Brian to email me... LOL... j/k |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
oh, Marge, this is great, I love it!! Kathleen indy31_99@yahoo.com |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
This is fabulous Marge....Really great....Love it. A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
This is wonderful Marge... send me an angel would ya? won't be clipping any wings, i promise. Michael |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KitKat~ Brian smiles. Doreen~ Thank you, hon. Brian smiles. Kathleen~ It is oh, so true. Takes a real man to realize the importance of unfurling the angel's wings. David~ Sweetheart ... you make my day ! Marge smiles. Michael~ Thanks ... glad you enjoyed. Angels all around you ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Tell Brian I think he is very wise!! Tell Marge I think her poetry is wonderful! I truly love this one!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, A lovely poem. You know I put some on a wonderful women and I'm still waiting for her to come back. LOL *L* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ESP~ Brian grins like the cheshire cat.  Marge says thank you. Seymour~ You are just a rascal ... if you noticed ... it said 'the man that's really smart'... now where do you suppose that leaves you ? LOL ! Marge grins .. Thanks for the chuckle. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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DiObear Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 66Switzerland |
What a wonderful way to look at love. This poem is up there at the top of my 'favorite poems I've read'. Thanks. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Di0bear~ Thank you so very much for the glow of your words. I am deeply appreciative. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Marge, This is another masterful read from you. Your friend is very wise. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, my girl, you earn your wings every day  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeffrey~ Thank you ... and yes he is wise. I appreciate you. Balladeer~ Sweetheart, you sure know how to place a smile on my face. I just love you to pieces. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is delicate and lovely Marge...and with your help I'm sure to find me one of those angel soon!! Karma anyone??? he he I loved this Marge...and your friend is pretty smart too!!! Love You ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ You little cutie ! KARMA, indeed ! It will come ... it will come ! Thanks for the 'delicate and dainty' is that sort of like prissy ? LOL ! That's me ! I love that sense of humor of yours. You all would love this man ... he is a truly dear friend. I will share all of the latest replies with him tomorrow. He has enjoyed them so far. Love ya', gal ! K A R M A ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ You little cutie ! KARMA, indeed ! It will come ... it will come ! Thanks for the 'delicate and dainty' is that sort of like prissy ? LOL ! That's me ! I love that sense of humor of yours. You all would love this man ... he is a truly dear friend. I will share all of the latest replies with him tomorrow. He has enjoyed them so far. Love ya' gal ! K A R M A ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Lovely stuff Marge(y)... Wings unfurled. Angel flying high. Fly, little angel, return to me by and by. This is very sweet... love ya K |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kamla~ Hi, sweetie. So good to see your smiling face. Thanks for the read, hon. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very wise man, your friend, Brian! Lovely poem, Marge! Denise |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
this is beautiful marge...funny, I have a friend, also named brian...who sees women like that too....must be something in the name nice to know there are still some nice guys out there though huh? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ So pleased that you enjoyed it, my friend. Brian is still grinning. Corazon~ Yeah ... lots of them actually. They are getting wiser ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Enotneicna Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340Oakland, Or, USA |
^j^ Marge ^j^ such a wonderful verse....and such a wonderful friend.^j^ ^j^enjoyed very much ^j^ Words are my medicine. Read and live and love and heal! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Thank you for gifting us with this Heavenly bit of writing, Marge...The angels' wings are fluttering so softly tonight... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Enotneicna~ Thank you, my friend. I'm so pleased that it touched you. Claire~ I've felt the 'fluttering' too. Must be the May Angels ... thank you for your tender thoughts. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Just peaking my head in for a minute here, but the title to this one caught my eye and I wasn't dissapointed (although I never am with your work) lovely thoughts here |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marge, very wise words and wise friend, I need a little angel, with Karma.... any takers. devina. Parker |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot~ Glad to see your little head peeking in here. Take care, sweetie. So pleased you enjoyed and thank you. Parker~ Thanks ... and YEAH .. that Devina gal has got some Karma ! She's a charmer. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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daft Junior Member
since 2000-05-02
Posts 16 |
I found your poem to be very beautiful in that angelic way that you describe so very well. You friend is right & sounds very true. I'm glad that you have a friend like that who truly cares. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
sniff yuh |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Marge~ Absolutely Lovely! You have touched my heart yet again, dear! And I must commend your friend Brian, for he is a very smart fellow. I, too, feel the way he does, and it is refreshing to find someone else who has the same beliefs. Love Ya~ Terry ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Marge, I haven't replied in quite some time, and you may wish I refrain now, but the title caught my eye, and I had to read this. This is the prettiest thing I've read today, and I've read quite a few. Oh how I wish every man thought like that Brian character of yours. Too many get clipped unfortunately, but that goes both ways I believe. Thank you for sharing this widom and beauty with us. You and Brian make a darn good pair! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Daft~ Thank you so much. Welcome to Passion's. Walt~ Your sniffles lets me know you liked it. Thank you, tender poet. TerryW~ Sweetie, I already believe that you would be the man who would put the wings on an angel and watch her soar. You're a doll. PoetFemme~ Thanks for the read and the reply. Brian smiles and I let him. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, You always put the most beautiful thoughts into the most beautiful words.This poem was written by an angel with full, lush wings Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, my sweet friend~ Was browsing the 'oldies' and found your sweet reply ... thank you my friend. Love to you and yours. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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