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As We Love
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As We Love |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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“As We Love” Heart and Soul- I delicately pour… Each morsel dissolving- Within your smooth skin… Patience Be Damned- I’ve dreamed of this night, This life- For all time… Gently fill me- With a passion all yours… Lay your hand- Tender upon my cheek… Let our eyes meet- As we Kiss, As we Love… Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
devina, this is so lovely....a truly romantic poem.........  |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
devina, this is "dissolving" and you "delicately pour" these words that "Gently fill me" with lovely thought of your verse. Parker |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ Ohhhhhhh ! I like it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Devina, this is great. . . very romantic. . . Seems like there are more hopeless Romantics showing themselves around here every day!! ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
devina this is a big old *SIGH* just waiting to happen (smile) love this poem of desire and passion, yea-- who needs patience when there passion  great poem girly-girl!! ~as always, Take Care,JM~ -------------- I know it's been a long road To get these towns behind me and I Will gladly reap what we may sow-- I am there for you ... and you're there for me ... Are you waiting for Heart in hand Woman and man See me where I stand I am Heart Heart in hand ~vertical horizon~ |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Oh this has left me lusting for more....hehe Your words have brought about the most lovely of thoughts....The love of a woman shared with a man.  A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Sharon-Me thinks it's time to start wishing on that star of mine again...tis been a long time comin!!! James- Mr. Romance himself!!!!! Thank you dear...tis nice to hear from you....XXOOMarge- Glad to hear it sweetie... Sven- Just me wishing along dear...but romance is always a good thing... Janet- Sigh for me too girl...Thank you.. First Knight- I do believe you've caught me...he he Love your signature btw!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Devina- *Sigh* this was lovely hon. im a sap for romantic poems and this one definitely left my heart touched. you paint a beautiful picture here with your words, and one can truly feel the feelings behind every word. take care, amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Amy- Glad to know we have a few other romantics here...thank you!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hello again, sweet sister mine! How wonderful to hear your loving side again! Tender and loving...e me, soon, as I am back in business, lol...Love to you...as I can see what you've been wishing yourself toward. |
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