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DeEpMeLaNcHoLy
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since 2000-04-29
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0 posted 2000-04-29 01:12 PM


**i wrote this about a week ago,when we were going downhill**


Only Love

I wish I could be the only one
Be the one you truely love
Lonely with this empty heart
Waiting for you to make it whole
Will you see through it?
Through my eyes of tragic gaze?
Over misery
You're trapped within yourself
Just Waiting for someone to break you free
Could that someone be me?
Uneasy thoughts
When I fall asleep
Wishing you were by my side
Entrapped within my heart
Let me inside you
I know who you are
Through those lost eyes of tragedy
And through this battered heart of yours
Just let me in
Just let me be
The only one you love
Endless sunsets
Starless skies
Theres more that I see
In Your sadened eyes




 

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ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-04-29 03:36 PM


I can feel longing in this one...very beautifully written.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 2000-04-29 06:26 PM


Oh, this is so sad and filled with a great sense of longing.  Sorry to say, I relate all too well with how you feel.  Hang in there, it will get better!!  


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
3 posted 2000-04-29 06:30 PM


I think we all relate to these feelings sometimes   a very sad lonely feeling is displayed here and I feel your longing, don't give up  
tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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