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Tears Of Lost Love
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Tears Of Lost Love |
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DeEpMeLaNcHoLy New Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 9 |
Blinded Ways Clouded Skies You left me here You took it away Gave me nothing Watched The Tears They fall upon my cheek From redened eyes To starry skies My love for you fell weak Through empty gazes And dreamy phases I put you in my heart In sweet vows And purple owls I came to thee With an open mind And open soul Just hoping for you to make it whole But to my dismay You had treated me this way And Left me nothing but pain I'll never feel the same The way you made me feel Has become so unreal That I feel i cannot live Cos I have nothing left to give Filled me with sadness And enjoyed playing with my heart You were special to me You were something to me Now you're nothing to me *I wrote that last night as the one I loved difted away from me* < !signature--> [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 04-29-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I'm so sorry you are in pain...losing love is hard. Keep writing! That's a sure way to ease the heartache. Welcome to the family.. please check your email for a special welcome...  Note: I had to edit out the line you put in your poem to make the greeting card email work...I hope you don't mind... [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 04-29-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions! Great first post! I'm sorry for your pain, too. Denise |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Welcome to passions, We have all felt your pain at one time or another. Great first post btw. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DM~ Welcome to the circle of friends here at Passion's. This is a rather sad entrance ... but one that we hope will soon be replaced with smiles of joy found in new friendships. You've expressed your feelings very well. But, remember ... there's always something left to give. Thank you for sharing this with us. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
You've turned a bad experience into a good poem. I wish I could ease your pain. Kisses. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Welcome my friend to Passions. . . here you will find many who will comfort and encourage you and give you the strength that you seek... This was an excellent poem, it really hurts when we see one that we love and care for so much turn and drift... but we must go on. . .and continue the journey... -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Hi and welcome to Passions!!!! It is so hard to watch those we love and care for drift away from us. Cannot spend our lives dwelling on the past......have to look to the future. looking forward to more of your writing!!  Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Melencholy~ Oh I know how this feels unfortunately  but some hope that your getting stronger and will get through this with your last two linesYou were something to me Now you're nothing to me Way to go, your days will get better it just takes time, alot of time HUG Tracie By the way WELCOME to passions great first post Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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