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vandana
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When I saw your smile,
smiling as the sun so bright,
Time is right for love,
When you touch me,
An ocean whispers slowly
When you love me,
The wind blows,
When you say you love me,
I feel I am in heaven,
I feel whole world is mine,
When the time came to say goodbye,
I felt so lost,
Didn't know we have
To leave that soon
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1 posted 04-29-2000 11:45 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Oh, Little VanDana~
'When' I read your poetry ....
I read your heart.  Lovely, dear.
~*Marge*~


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A lovely poem! So sweet and sad....  
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Sighs, longing goodbyes.  Kisses.
Aimster
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so beautiful and sad at the same time. remembering the times we have together, is what carries us through the times we have to be apart. you captured your feelings wonderfully here and shared with all of us. thanks much!

amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~


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Sudhir Iyer
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5 posted 04-30-2000 08:18 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Great one, Vandana. Wonderful expression of an emotional trauma behind parting.

Regards, Sudhir

 Take each day as it comes,
Consider each day as a flight,
Try hard to succeed and fly,
Surely then you will reach some height.

But if by some chance you don’t,
Remember that tomorrow will always come.
Learn this well and learn this hard
That today’s efforts will pay for tomorrow’s fun.

A Crazy Monster, a.k.a Ski

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Thank you,everyone!!!!
 
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